by Lost Boy
This story keeps getting better and better. Keep writing!
One of the best chapters yet! Can't wait for next as it just keeps getting better.
Really fast paced and intriguing to read. Sometimes beyond my ability to comprehend all of the facts that are given.
Very involved and orginal writing makes for a fantastic read
Thanks for the chapter
The constant use of 'and'; the unfinished sentences and the bad grammar lost me.
No idea what's going on in the detail but the big picture is very enjoyable. 5 stars.