All Comments on 'Iron Rain Pt. 18'

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Place the name of the POV character at the start of each sub-chapter please. It is not a huge problem but this will make twenty seconds of confusion disappear. Thanks.

I like the way you are throwing every mythology you can at this story, I am a fan of the Norse. If you haven't before, try reading American Gods by Neil Gaiman. Great book.

I read the first 17 chapters in under 2 days and I've spent the last week waiting with baited breath for more, but this just feels like a teaser. Please give us more soon!!

Also please list the characters at the beginning of the chapter to refresh our memories, and if you write more abrubt scene changes please note whose perspective we're reading.

The amount of information in each chapter is immense and comprehending the written word sometimes become mind boggling for this old man.

Even though I become confused in some spots of the epic tale, I become even more infatuated by the complexity of the storyline. The work seems to keep drawing me in to the web and shadows of the unimaginable.

Thanks for the great work.

Hi,

I have to follow my predecessors. I took some lines to figure out who is speaking, but it isn't necessarely a bad thing. But what I really hop for is many more chapters!

Sincerely,

a glowing fan.

why is ever woman in this story the same. After hearing "yes lover" from each of them and at-least 100 times in this series it gets kinda annoying.

Fantastic story every chapter I read get better

Nice one!

Sometimes I'm not sure what's going on but the cmplexity and the detail are phenomenal.