All Comments on 'Iron Rose Ch. 02'

by vanalas

Sort by:
  • 9 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I feel like am getting my life back again. Please don't ever take that long. I loooooove your stories so much.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
here we go!!!!!!!!,hehehe

yes. yes yes yes yes yes yes

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
well,well,well THE KING Z BACK NOWWWWWWW,HEHEHE AND WILD FLOWER Z SO HOOOOOOT NOW

firstly let me thank van 4 this wonderful c

ome back.... u v made my day booo thank u my king

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
Gabriel s the most foolish guy on this world

fuck that moron has the guts,how dare he huh?????...he fuckig looks. at us as if ts sth good huh and he has betrayed jack too!!!! lyk he did to Ang,fuck him

....hahahaha,oh how i smiled when the guy humiliated jack hahaha that look on d face,the water ooooooooopsπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜Žhehehehe the arguments at home yeeep u r kidding me,WE R JUST BEGINNING!!! HUH

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
Toby indeed ur TOAD

heeeehheeeehheeeee foolish guy simply 4gets,poor him no more triumphs but just failures,,,,,every part is interesting fuck,oh how La don stole d spotlight from jack eeeeh,deserve it bitch,,,,,how jack was shot and that look on d face after find6 out ANGELO πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜Ž hhhhhhmmmmm lets get thisssssssss

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
My king

plz where is Cris?????,man i miss him,Alicia poor lady oh yeeahπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ how mig saved her from jack wooooow,,,,,, my king i v waited for these scenes 4 so long plz give us more plz van plz ,i miss Angel,Xris.....fuck,what z gabriel regreting about??????baby have we even started 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😠😠😠😠😠😠😠they have to pay huh,foooolish idiots

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
theme song

ITS TOO LATE TO APOLOGIZE

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
If Jack's gonna die

Make it slow and painful not with a quick gunshot. Maybe set him on fire it's really slow and painful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
chapter 3 please

Thank u for chapter 2, you made it short to keep us in suspense. Looking foward to chapter 3

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
uservanalas@vanalas
I have been successful probably because I have always realized that I knew nothing about writing and have merely tried to tell an interesting story entertainingly. My own experience is that once a story has been written, one has to cross out the beginning and the end. It is th...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES