All Comments on 'Iron Rose Ch. 07'

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naughtymattynaughtymattyover 4 years ago
Can this story not end?

I didn't expect a lot from Christian, I didn't. But damn, he is a level 10 asshole. He said that he's going to hurt someone when he is to make up his mind regarding the ultimatum. But you don't just go around and fuck both brothers when you try to figure out your mess of a mind. He's good for nothing but running away. Miguel took risks just to give him a chance, but the self-centered fucker isn't sensitive enough to consider that. All he is capable of thinking is satisfying his dick, Miguel is hot as fuck but Carter is more accessible. I'm so ecstatic Miguel did not end up with him but I'm still pissed.

Now Carter, another insensitive and self-centered asshole. Asking your brother to your wedding with the man he equally loves as you do. Who does that? And what for, to rub it in his face? He claim it as a time for Miguel to make up by abandoning him. Un-freaking-believable. Worst brother.

And Miguel, his ending is still pain. The bleeding boy, he is. What a waste the only guy he loves and can see past his walls do not have the balls to fight for him. I wonder if Miguel would be able to heal by himself with time or someone would do that for him. So to answer the question if I would like to see him again, fuck yeah! He deserves to be happy after everything.

This is a great end, not the explosion I quite want, the heavy action type but an emotionally piercing one nonetheless. I love how it ended except maybe the Christian and Carter drama, I despise them both.

Also, I've been noticing the use of question mark instead of exclamation point and the use of names interchangeably.

Love from here and I can't wait to hear more from you Van and your stories.

mendesiasmendesiasover 4 years ago
Why?

I'm crying right now..... best ending ever.... 😱😒😒😒😒😒 I loved Miguel to the end and I'd like to see him. he's the toughest and my favorite character so far.... I love him. fuck Carter and Christian..... Miguel in the city of love. thank God you didn't kill him in the end. love you

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It wasn't good that carter and Christian got married

Christians love is to miguel. So marrying carter to to make people happy isn't right Christian doesn't love carter as much as he loves miguel. Miguel should have had a happy ending after all that he's been through. This ending is kind of bad in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

They all should just have remained single to be honest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Give Miguel a HEA

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What a waste Christian and Carter character

I love how it ended except maybe the Christian and Carter drama, I despise them both.

Also, I've been noticing the use of question mark instead of exclamation point and the use of names interchangeably.

Love from here and I can't wait to hear more from you Van and your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

So, that’s not a very happy ending, but really miserable. After Prantonio, I thought this one to have a better ending, but unfortunately. Christian going for 2nd best, listening to that despicable Ruth who emotionally blackmailed him. Carter happy that he won Christian from his brother. And much more. After these 2 unhappy endings of your last stories I’m sorry to say that I’m not sure I’m looking forward to more stories with more unhappy endings, Vanalas.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
i ship Mark with miguel=2M

first of all my king .the ending was so unpleasant ,how can u make carter and that barber Chris a couple??????,,,so bad i cant believe after my praveen's tragedy u gave us this my king......fyn i hate Chris with passion and he ddnt deserve Miguel but guys lets think about Mark.i swear he has been the best character after Miguel and i think the combination MIGARK would be so damn sexy

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
i thought i had hated Gabriel but i think so far the worst character in all the 7 stories is Chris

hell yap,that fool fucks the two bros am even ashamed to call him the leading man NOPE,MY MARK Z BETTER

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
Yes,let my mark come back with miguel and..... Praveeeeen in another story with santiago,Adrian and my Nick

i want them all in one story to have it mwwwwaaaaaa just imagine that my dears,Praveen will grow some balls if u know what i mean,hey am sure u remember Adrian very and Miguel,their fiery is hot......otherwise. i miss this story my Miguel i almost died when he drowned and yet cursing when he tried to kill Chris eeeeeh,man

..............my Brian.Lucio,Alicia,...fuck i miss them...though u didnt have to make him sad

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
Huh that fool Alex thought he would rape us again.....hahaha Brandon

The end of dragons was satisfying 😍 😍 😍,yap his throat needed some starbbing hahahaha,and I was mad as fuck when that fool Alex tried that stunt but hey...my dona shown him the level,,,,that fool was so stupid,his stupidity cant even be reached by abillion dollar fools,yes SPPPITTT🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

Actually somehow i pitied Brandon,poor guy he was obsessed thats y he did that so his death has hurt me little.......Felix Die bitch

...my Daniel,oh my Daniel i am sorry but i love himπŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯his fate got me sad

josranvictorjosranvictorover 4 years ago
waiting 4 raging love

i hope to c u soon my miguel

vanalasvanalasover 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks guys

I love you so much guys and I'm really glad you loved this series.... it's my pleasure to write such a good story and provide it to you and you loved it. you've got no idea how happy this makes me. thanks a lot.....

Raging love is definitely coming soon guys, I promise. But you're gonna have to just forgive me a bit. I'm now back in school and this year is gonna be a bit tough for me guys, entering medical school and all.... but I'm not gonna disappear like I did before. even if I'm gonna be posting a chapter a month, I promise to deliver. otherwise, watch out for 'Raging love' a story that will surely captivate your soulπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Chancem77Chancem77over 4 years ago
Seriously...

This made me cry. I really do not like Christian. What an ass. Miguel deserves better. Great story. Can't wait see what you write next. I'm a fan.

~Chance~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Can't wait for Raging Love!!!!!!!!

It would be so epic for Miguel to just pop up in Raging Love, hope the city of love his in is were Praveen/Travis is to just make the story even more exciting as F********!!!!!!....this surely can't be the end of La DonaπŸ˜…πŸ˜₯πŸ˜«πŸ˜žπŸ˜–

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