All Comments on 'Irresistible Force'

Love it 5*, and favorited.

It's the story of a humble man that loves his children, and comes to love a good woman despite being crapped on by a horrible woman.

I loved his daughters reaction to the engagement. It was a little over the top, but funny.

And every so often someone surprises ŵith an absolutely top story. Thank you.

Cheers

Excellent story, really enjoyed reading it.

Excellent story. The plot line, the characters, the interactions are all first class. And, the ending is a lovely little twist. Very well done and thank you for sharing.

Great story Thank You

Nearly got it, I figured her SEAL brother had got her into the house but didn't twig his further involvement..

Excellent story, well crafted and written, maybe a little bit too sweet but that's what makes a romanic story.

Excellent story and although a nice final plot twist it is not really believable that he wouldn't have known his brother in law if the siblings were any close.

What a lovely story, a good man who would give his life for his children.

Slowly finding his true love .

Five stars

Top drawer! Kudos to you. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Absolutely stunning !

Thanks! That was a great story.

Wow! An incredible story. Well crafted. Believable characters. Perfect ending. Progression of time very satisfying. Action. Romance. The progression of true love. This is one of the best stories I've read in a very long time. Thank you for this gift. K

Excellent story. Glad you cleared up the mystery (somewhat) of how she was able to be in the house undetected. Great writing.

Great story! How about a future story about Lance?

Just my kind of story. Two people who are more than a little broken find salvation in each other. Throw in a bit of courtroom drama, a bit of action/adventure—what more could one ask? 5 stars.

5/5. A little slow paced but you got there in the ned. Thanks for this.

Wonderful story!

5

Refreshing storyline but several “knots” in the plot lines was distracting at times. Sabrina’s stalking of our hero was too obvious right from the start. As their relationship progressed, he was simply too clueless for readers to buy into the premise. You focused too much on an apparent preconceived plot script that the transitions were clumsy. It may sound like I’m being a bit harsh, but I see a lot of promise in your writing and want to provide ideas for growing your craft. Entertains for sure and the Lance reveal was perfectly done. 4.5*

OK, this was really really amazing. Great characters, interesting plot, karma for all deserving, good and bad (except poor Deke :( ). Easy 5 stars and thank you for the pleasure of reading this.

Wonderful. Five very easy stars.

Thank you.

...her brother, the SEAL...

I was thinking that she was Spooky Godek's distant cousin.

5 star story!

Really sweet! Enjoyed this!

10*++

Excellent story! You pretty much had everything bar the kitchen sink in there, that’s not a bad thing though, it kept it fresh and gave it legs, if I’ve got one teensy complaint, it’s that I’ve have liked a bit more focus on his physical condition post accident/coma. Other than that, the writing and spelling flowed really well, we liked and invested in the characters and let’s be honest we fell in love with those two little girls! Many thanks for both writing and posting, cheers, Ppfzz. 5⭐️

Brilliant👏🏻 no hesitation in clicking 5 stars.👍🏻

I liked the story but am deeply bothered by the implication that it is perfectly OK to assault and severely injure criminals before they are turned over to the police. Perhaps this is an American thing - in my country this would be regarded as intolerable thuggery. I worry for the children, whose uncle thinks that he is above the law, and whose actions are condoned by their parents.

Great and well written. Just could not put it down.

Now that is a film I would watch. I can say no more.

Great story five star story! Thank you!

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Outstanding story. Loved the ending. 5stars

A thoroughly enjoyable story. 5 Stars! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The main character (and so the story generally) came across like ; a reluctant hero (with a troubled past) , poor dad mentality , some kind of twisted high moral with an ego.... and touch of the Brady bunch. It was an okay story but entirely my cup of tea. Either way thanks for the read.

good story

A story that my not seem special to all, but o this father of nine and grandfather of many, I found it to be very special.

With over 50 years experience as a counselor, and over a dozen years as a book editor, I appreciate how well the plot was organised and the loveable characters (well most of them) were presented.

The Hoary Cleric

Great story A great ending

I agree with The Hoary Cleric.

As for the " intolerable thuggery" sometimes ya got to do what you got to do!

You have to have hardship and misfortune to make a good strong romance story. That you have.

The incubator got what she asked for just wish she could have seen how much of life she really lost.

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Que Romantique!

Just the right amount of peril and antagony.

I can not believe that in 3 weeks NOBODY figured out your enquiry!

"She knew the job was dangerous when she took it" is a version of what Super Chicken said to his sidekick Fred (the Lion) - "You knew the job was dangerous when you took it, Fred!" in the Jay Ward and Bill Scott (Rocky and Bullwinkle) eponymously named cartoon which (first) ran (sadly) for only 17 episodes, from 09.09.67 to 30.12.67 (but in repeats until 19.09.70) along with Tom Slick (both 6 min. cartoons) on the George of the Jungle cartoon show.

11/10 Martini Glasses of Super Sauce!!!!!

Brilliant and credible. Had realistic fears, emotions and humanity. Keep Bleeeping mate its a pleasure to read yr stuff

Loved the Superchicken reference, although you are definitely tipping your hand about your age. I loved the story. Your character development was rich and thorough. You made them real people with real emotions, not the cardboard cutouts gagging for sex. Your plot had enough twists and turns to keep it interesting. Excellent job.

Great little twist at the end of a fabulous romance!

The Hoary Cleric

Oh, yes, of course it is five.

I love your originality!

This is the second story I have read by this author. Repeat, author. Many writers submit and publish stories. While I am not an expert on the literary world, I know what I like and appreciate. I have read two works by bleeep, and feel that he is one of the best writers I have read in many, many years. I hope he continues to write stories for everyone to enjoy.