All Comments on 'Is Love All or Nothing? Ch. 06'

I appreciate the addition of the asterisks indicating a change of scene; it makes for a much better read although you didn't have any between Keith and Jackie's kisses and Melissa and Luke's bedroom scene.

Great chapter. It seems that some sexual game between this pair begins! I hope it does not become the center of the story.

On the other hand, I do not even see the role of Melissa's boyfriend, he seems to be a good guy, but I find him very sexually active, although I suppose Melissa is like that too. But I do not know, will it really be the good guy that is represented so far? And Andy, what role will it end up having?

What will happen in the double date?

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Thank you for how you are writing this!!!!!!!!