All Comments on 'Is Something The Matter? Ch. 03'

Seems that steve is being slowly conditioned nice story keep writing it will be interesting where you take this story lots of options for you to explore

Keep writing the story, it is really good

Excellent progression of her acceptance to lead him to new levels of the kink he introduced her to; love it

very well thought out super subject matter , keep going

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I am loving the story. Well done sir.

Please don’t feel that you need to apologize for anything. It is what it is. I think you are doing a fine job.

We are all big boys and girls and should be able to handle anything you write.

Chapter 3 page 1 line 19 the older woman standing (in) the doorway…

Chapter 3 page 2 line 28 he browed through… Did you mean “he browsed through” ?

Happy to help. It is a pleasure to read stories that have so few mistakes.

a new fan

Yes, something is wrong, I like this to much.

Oh Steve if you only knew