All Comments on 'Is Something The Matter?'

It is sad that something so fantastic as a penis become passe and forgettable. I think that when it comes to that situation, it's time to let the dick out and give it some air and sexy time without the metal or plastic attachment. I mean days or weeks, not just a few hours or one climax. Unless you put her (the lady bits) in a chastity belt or device, it isn't fair to either partner to not allow freedom.

I really enjoyed your story. From the end point, they could carry on in a number of directions. Just stay on with Mike chastity to spice up sex. Or, go down a path towards D/s or even bondage. Or, even something more hardcore like feminization. Regardless, good job making us feel how they each looked at a curiosity and explored their way into enjoying it.

This really needs to be continued!

Okay so this was supposed to be a 1-off. I've written part 2 and submitted for approval, and have a part 3 in mind, but not written yet.

Thanks to all for your positive feedback and comments as well as the constructive suggestions I got. I tried to write erotica a few years back and was thoroughly flamed, so the initial feedback on the first story has been heartening.

thank you for the nice beginning. I would love to read the next parts

nice to add some humiliation with Marion as a ball kicker with Amie

Good premise.

But, so far at least, all part of the back story.

Four stars for potential.