All Comments on 'Isabella Ch. 04'

I liked this story clad to see and a new chapter.

i really liked this story but i wanted to know what kind of baby they had

I am writing Roger's story and you will see more of Isabella and Rafa including their baby.

This is a very good story and cant wait to read about Roger.

I really like this story. Very good plot lines and characters were defined well. I hope we have more chapters. I am adding you to the list of authors that I check regularly for new stuff. You might want to take on an editor to help with some grammar and spelling but the writing is very good.

One of the best I have read in a while, and I love Roger!!

I like your basic idea very much, but things feel hurried and forced, which is spoiling the story for me, as is the poor editing and spell-checking which has been getting steadily worse as the chapters go on.

Take more time with things, especially in revealing pieces of the past, and your story will improve.

For me its the comments that people leave that makes me mad... I've read the chapters and I love this story and your writing, don't let negative comments destory what you want to share with the world. I do hope you continue its getting so good!

Your story is awesome, it's not an in your face with the sexual, it's a story with interesting characters. Cant wait to read more.

Was really hoping to see more of Isabella, Rafa, Roger, and all of the other wonderful characters…any chance that you might still be writing?

Carol G