All Comments on 'Isabelle's Awakening Ch. 02'

this was delicious. Again, I like your writing style. Her introspection adds to the narration, and what a narration it was. I like when a writer is caught up in their work, but you may have been too aroused by your craft (as was I), because there were a few distracting spelling errors.

Fortunately, the whole of the piece (with the first chapter) was quite pleasing to me. I hope you will add to this series. I think Isabella's inner struggle will be quite exquisite when Jessica eventually takes her. Mmmm, I can't wait.

Well done. Great story.

This is a fun, hot story and I'm really interested to see where these characters will get to. Hope Isabelle's Awakening continues!