All Comments on 'Isekai, West Virginia Pt. 01'

by DragonCobolt

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toolbox0toolbox08 months ago

Looking like the beginning of another great ride!

There are some odd word choices here and there, could use a bit of editing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hardrider56Hardrider568 months ago

Another very interesting story line. I say go for it big time.

Talon420Talon4208 months ago

Finally a decent Isekai story! Can't wait for Chap.2!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Yep, if I am ever transported into another world it should definitely have harems.

Nic2000Nic20008 months ago

Great story start! I am a bit confused as the story hops from character to character. Is there a main character?

lAnatomistelAnatomiste8 months ago

Do you write _anything_ that isn't a 5-star story?

(I didn't;t really care for Delta Vee - sorry, I don't know how to get a Greek delta to print - but it was still 5-stars.)

Nouh_BdeeNouh_Bdee8 months ago

Holy fuck I’m excited for this

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Did someone read 1632?

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