by DragonCobolt
Looking like the beginning of another great ride!
There are some odd word choices here and there, could use a bit of editing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Yep, if I am ever transported into another world it should definitely have harems.
Great story start! I am a bit confused as the story hops from character to character. Is there a main character?
Do you write _anything_ that isn't a 5-star story?
(I didn't;t really care for Delta Vee - sorry, I don't know how to get a Greek delta to print - but it was still 5-stars.)