All Comments on 'Island Love Ch. 02'

I like the intrigue as to what exactly is happening at this resort and what part his "wife" plays. What Mr. Grange has listed as Philip's reasons for being there make sense, but he's obviously overstayed his need and it's time to go. If he can snag a relationship with Isabel out of the deal, then I'd say it was worth it.

The story makes sense, it's interesting and flows well. I thought it became a little abrupt with access to the Rodwell, pageant, and aftermath. Only members are allowed inside, no exceptions, but suddenly Tim and Philip are allowed because Zoltan invited them? It seemed to be taking great leaps, perhaps moving a bit too quickly, but still holding my interest.

Eager to see part 3, hoping to see several questions answered. Thanks for posting.

ok,, I give it 5 stars,, but im confused, whos fucking who ? ,, I know Philip fucked Isabel, tims not got anyone but his wife is probably fucking everyone, tibbys keeping it a secret but shes probably fucking ben and Gabriel, this like a wild mystery tour, haha, I can hardly wait for the ending, ,, well written and its creative, thanks for sharing.

It was a little confusing about who was speaking in the bar. Looking forward to the conclusion.

tibby should come clean about her role at the resort

These characters are both silly and deranged. Tibby and Isabel are impossible and the protagonist is worse.

but it seems like watching a drug fueled dream of some sort

But interesting and well written.

A brace of flawed characters who are self-absorbed and unwilling to communicate with each other properly. I’m struggling to emphasise with any of them. On the other hand I’m finding this curiously compelling reading. Will be looking out for the next instalment.

I am hoping at some point we learn more about Tibby and her stay or arrival at this resort. Did she just find this place online when she was looking to see what or where to go when she abandoned her husband? Once there she fell into the seduction and started out as one of the girls but somehow as "hospitality manager" is she the Madame? It was only 4 months so that isa lotto accomplish in a short time so maybe she is just a Hospitality Manager but I can't see how she has not had sex. Shelf as there was no love and no desire so she must have done something. I can't see her in that state of mind being celibate.

I hope he moves on with either Isable or alone but at peace.

This is like the Keystone Cops with Laurel and Hardy with Mae West thrown in to further confuse.

Surprisingly interesting read.

He admits he didn’t know his wife when he married her. And the new girl tells him he doesn’t know her. He’s an immature fool, and Tibby is nuts. Run from them!

But it's hard to follow and take more.work than I'm.used to. I'll keep reading.

It is an odd tale told oddly, but the dialogue is fantastic. I have to see it thru.

The author’s style of having characters in conversation needs clarity. It was often difficult to follow who was saying what.

He needs to get away from all these people including isabel who works there, knowing what they do at this filth hotel.

Can someone please explain to me what the hell is happening in this story - it’s all over the place - it’s like someone has thrown all the paragraphs in the air and see where they landed ……

Love it. You are a fantastic writer. Professional? Great character development. Please ignore the ignorant and those unable to understand the slow weaving of the plot. Some of these commenters must be very poor readers. Keep up the good work please.

Good story, however the plot is very confusing and all over the place. I’m having trouble following what is going on. That’s why I gave this 3*

This is just so dumb I've got to stop.

The dialogue is just absolute sewage. Two characters talking at each other, but not to each other, as neither one properly replying to the other.

it's kinda reminds me as if the author saw a really bad 70s romance and was trying to imitate it but just fucked it up even further.

the whole isabel romance is just ridiculous. the whore house plot even more so.

mostly because the author fails at every turn to properly pull together the plot and instead delivers an absolute piece of shit.

Sheesh. That whole chapter read like an overwrought over acted community theater play.

I am still enjoying it but I really hope you successfully pull each separate (confusing?) plot line together in part three.

I'm just along for the Femdom agitprop ride now.

Wha?

Ok, just, but disjointed in places, I had to go back several times to make sure I had read it right.

Tibby is flighty and a liar. Self centered with 'buyer's remorse. Isabel is steadier, maybe because of her dependent daughter. Phillip is a bit like Alice in Wonderland. Tricky trying to sort it out on the fly, but what nightmare or exciting adventure.

Confusing.😱😳😮😲

Harsh reality vs delusions of sentimental romantics. Desperate disappointed disillusioned wounded.

'All the lonely people, where do they all go to?' (Prometheus Gardens, 'the bringer of light ' or chains of the rock?)