All Comments on 'Island Romance'

THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING U MADE ME AND MY GF WET. PLEASE KEEP UR STORIES COMING, I LOVE THEM ALL.

Your narrative voice is a little different here than in your other stories but you're very consistent and it works well. Whether you "write" your stories or not, you're a craftsman. Anyway, you could read the telephone directory and it would sound so erotic. Do you have an older brother?

Your story is so romantic and sexy. Love the way you set the scene.