All Comments on 'Island Slave Ch. 01'

i hope the other ch is quick i loved ur story it was awesome

I think your writing is very good. This is the first story of yours that I have read and look forward to reading more.

Good story

I am in awe of your abilities! It isn't just the flow of your words (and your blessedly impeccable editing skills!) but that you capture the emotion of the situation in the pacing of your writing without delving into verbal chaos. Well done!