All Comments on 'Isolated Love Ch. 02'

I still don't have an editor *sob* but I'm doing my best here, some things just escape the mind.

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-ERC

I want more of these two! Also, maybe a little more length...

Definitely a good slow burn tale, here. Realistic to an extent, but it's too bad that Ara doesn't have much self-respect. However, Grayson would be an idiot to let her get away. I can speak from experience that the best cure for the breakup blues is sex with a gorgeous black girl. I married mine. :D

5 Solid Stars.

Maybe I'm just being greedy but can you please make the chapters a bit longer? And give Ara more confidence, she needs to know that she is worthy of love from an attractive, single, no drama type of guy, that won't put her down just to satisfy his own ego.

Arabeth finally saw Benji's true colors, I only felt sorry for her a little bit. She definitely brought that nonsense on herself.

Grayson need to let go of his ex. Holding on is only causing him misery. There isn't nothing wrong with him being friends with Arabeth or any other female. Just because they meet to have coffee doesn't mean it has to lead to a relationship.

Great story. Clearly defined characters. Nice read on lazy afternoon. If you need and editor, let me know. I'll be happy to do it for you.

I'd LOVEEEEE an editor! Contact me as soon as possible, I could use some help!

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Please update I'm loving where this is going!

Keep up the good work....please update and do not give up on this on this story. There are a lot story that are unfinished on this site, please do not be one of those writers.

Keep the chapters coming. I'm so emotionally invested that I can't wait for your next update

You can easily do better, especially with a good editor.

Still, a five, for encouragement.

Could be so much better with an editor, there are so many errors or detracts from the story! 2*

Sorry to disappoint you but I made it known that I haven't found an editor yet.

I always get attached to good stories with completely unlikable main characters like arabel is the worst from her ignorance with benji to that "feisty" girl attitude that gets old real quick

Anyway, this story is good! No matter what all the complainers have to say, it is still a good story. And if they do not want to help you, with the editing then they need to shut the freak up! I get tired of those so called grammar experts giving advice and never stepping up to the plate. That being said….

I really like this story and I like your characters a lot. I hope Benji get's hit by a Mack Truck, (sorry). Now that Grayson has seen Arabeth's V-girl now he has to ask her out! This story has so many possible outcomes. Take your time developing each installment, do not feel obligated to rush a chapter out because we are asking…..begging…pleading!

5 stars for you!