All Comments on 'Isolated Love Ch. 04 Pt. 2'

I love this story, love that it's main character is someone you could easily find in the real world and I love the pace. What I'm trying to say is screw the haters!

Yes, Arabeth is naïve. So are a LOT of women in college. Yes, she has very little self-respect. So do a LOT of women in this world. Benny is a bad guy. The asshole is a user, plain and simple.

Grayson is a good guy, even if his taste in music isn't that great. I think Arabeth will make the right decision when it matters.

5 Solid Stars. Keep up the great work, GML!

Your doing a great job. Not every women is the same and I like the way you are writing Arabeth. She reminds me of me a little bit. I went though that holding on to someone that wont change and you still believe they will chose you. So keep up the good work in life you make mistakes but you learn from them and that is what Arabeth is doing. She even may had a lot of set backs, but sometime you cant help who you fell in love with. And the hardest part is trying to fell out of love with that person you know is no good but all you can do is try. So keep writing your story I love it

Courtney is crazier then Benji. Too bad Grayson didn't call the police. He had no proof it was psycho that thrashed his car but it could've been enough to get something on the record. There will be other times she will harass him. I wonder if he will tell Arabeth about Courtney before she does something to screw with what he is trying to build with her.

It appears Kidd and Ina got some issues that they need to work on.

I did feel and little annoyed by arabeth but I understand that though the story she is suppose to grow and I look forward to her being confident enough to punch benji right in the nuts.

I like that you are sticking to your guns with this story. Granted there are many that are not happy with Arabeth, but we are forgetting is that these are college students and many of us have made just as many if not more stupid decisions when we were that age. The point that I think you are making is that everyone can learn and grow. I personally would like the girl I once was at that age, but would not hang out with her due to her sheer reckless and careless nature.

Writing about retards.

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I am fan of this story and I am enjoying your characters even if some of them make my left twitch. Don't like Courtney but I think that Benji is perfect for her. Arabeth is ding bat but hey I like her anyway!! Grayson is my hero!!

I'm not someone who had any complaints about your writing but nothing makes me angrier than when author's post defensive rants about their writing before posting their work. If you don't want to hear comments and critiques -of al types - don't post your work in a public space with a comments section. that simple

I can understand why you ranted; however, take constructive criticism for what it is all other disregard. The character Arabeth is like many women of different ages who have the same type of nativity, not just because she is in college. I have seen women in their 30s and 40s act the same way when is come to a man/woman. So take all criticism with a grain of salt. My gran use to say: 'Opinions are a dime a dozen and not worth two cents'

I am so friggen sick of writers not writing here anymore because of annoying people/comments if i were you id just do what is true to me and write away. Please don't even overthink about these randoms please :) BTW THE STORY IS BOMB :D

I am one of the one's who disliked Arabeth, but have truly enjoyed the story. You are a good writer, please don't stop on account of negative comments. You have a gift and thank you for sharing it !!

Peace and Blessings !!!

F2P

Hi I love your story it's just the right balance. When are you going to continue it? Is this the end? If so I am a little disappointed.

This is an amazing story and I NEED this to continue.

Please continue writing because I really love the story and everything you're doing with it. So please don't let a little negative feedback to sway you from writing!

I promise guys... If you hadn't checked my update on my profile, please do so.

Much Love,

ERC

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I love the characters in this story! Arabelle's dysfunctional behavior makes her endearing. Please keep writing. Its a great plot!

""Arabeth" not "Arabelle"

I love your story, with or without an editor!

Hello: I hope you have fully recovered from your car wreck and that you are doing well. This is a great story and I can't wait for the remainder of it. Please update soon... Be blessed and healed...

Pamela

been awhile so whats up

This is yet another good story that is not finished, or looks like it will be. Wish we could clean out all of the unfinished stories so we don't start t read them.