All Comments on 'It Ain't Paranoia if... Pt. 02 Ch. 04'

This rambling "story" has NOTHING to do with part 01. The story just jumps from one thread, to another, then to another...... I do not believe this story was written by the same author as part 01. The is no emotion, affection, or even description of any interpersonal relationships. Not one thing erotic about this story.

Makes my day when i have another story from you to read!

Excellent continuation of a great story

5/5

no pathos

Absolutlly 1 of the best ongoing stories i have read pls more soon. Kno ur hard work is enjoyed and appreciated.

I have enjoyed this series from the start and this is another great chapter

Most of this reads like an epilogue. So and so did this. We did that. Just finishing up a story. Nothing for romance, no hints of sex, nothing violent to speak of other than this gun fired and these guns fired.

So totally boring.