All Comments on 'It All Started in Paradise'

I love this story. 5stars. Deserves more for the way Sauler has so tenderly crafted it.

The characters are realistic, particularly the 3 mature ones. No anaconda dicks. Saggy tits.

Nice touch to juxtapose 3 matures against 2 young people, & bro-sis, sibling pair-sibling pair, mom-son.

Buildup is slow particularly the massage scenes but sure, pre-cum inducing.

Love the breezy humor.

“Heaven without the inconvenience of dying.”

“His ejaculation is quite substantial. Enough to put out a small fire.”

The bro-sis haircut chapter is sexy esp the pee bit which is a nice hot suprise.

The sail fuck, the bro seeing sis in underwear with translucent fluffy panty made me near come just visualizing it.

I’ve vacationed in Thailand’s remote islands before so I relate to the solitude, idyll & the charm of the rural folks. This story captures the atmospherics well.

Would have liked to see the mature sis fucking the young stud, & the mature bro fucking the girl. Or some sex action between the 3 matures. But, OK, the story is still sexy.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. 5 stars. Buildup a bit lengthy but well worth it. The Thai bro titty-fucking his sis, & his sis peeing over his dick gets me really going. Ditto the mature conservative sis come alive jamming roughing her bro against the sailboat mast doggying him. Saula, you sure know how to do it.

Had to stop a few times as this story was so detailed that I visualized almost every scene. Enjoyed some of the slow build up but would have preferred to see Penchan and Anurak massage each other while the two watched - Anurak massage his mom sensually. Possible then have Ollie and Olivia re-enact the massage. After mom-son left than Ollie and Olivia would have sex rather than the sailboat scene.

Just my thought Otherwise 5 plus stars looking forward to similar stories and thank you for writing. Enjoyed Nin cutting Anurak's hair.

What a highly arousing journey, skilfully written with class. Another intensely erotic read from the best author on Literotica. Thank you

This is the most sensual & erotic story I hv read here so far. Very well-written. The characters are real & relatable. I’m so weary of monster dicks & sexual triathletes, this story is a nice change.

The bro/sis haircut chapter is so naughty & sexy, I can almost imagine I’m there peeking in on their antics. The sis peeing on her bro is so hot.

The massages are so erotic. The masseuse sis “preparing” her masseur bro so that he is “presentable”. The masseuse mom “preparing” her masseur son so that he is “presentable”. The son oiling his mom before the demo massage. The mom oiling her son. The nude masseuse sis & masseur bro working on the mature bro/sis pair in the couples massage creates so much erotic tension.

Five stars. You deserve more.

Keep writing.

Saula,

A very well-crafted story. A lot of teasing and build up for Ollie and Olivia. Nicely done. Very arousing and well-written.

Dan

Thank you for this beautiful journey into such an erotic chapter. I enjoy you stories very much. 5 Stars cause we can't give more.

Very well written, very erotic and exciting.

5 stars. Deserves more. Really enjoyed this story.

Fantastic private island holiday setting. The characterization is great, I can almost hear, touch & feel them.

Well done, keep these stories coming.

Great story! Your English style of writing had me laughing out loud quite a few times. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Another amazing story.

Fun erotic read. 5 stars

It's a bit of a long story for me but non the less. . . it is very nicely done. Great job.

B

I love this well-written eroded story. I love the clever interplay between the guests/hosts, & the mature sibling - young sibling teasing interactions. I lived in Thailand for a few years, the Thai characters nicely articulated.

It took awhile, but then that which is really really good often needs to brew a bit.

I really enjoyed this story as I too have had to travel for work, and yes it can be a bitch when your doing it alone. But this story has all new meaning to traveling. Thanks and keep the writing going.

OUTSTANDING!

Wonderfully sexy storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️