All Comments on 'It all Started with a Car Crash'

Sweet story, Cagivagurl. I gave it a five. It never could have been anything else. If you would like to read another great story from Cagivagurl and many other fine writers, tune in on December 5 for the "When a Man Loves a Woman" event. Stories in many different categories. Randi.

So beautiful

Wow, what a great ride that was. The will they? won’t they? Should they? Kept me guessing till the end.

Damn, what a great read. I really wish you had tagged this as Romance as I almost skipped it. Then I would have missed a really fabulous love story between two people who deserved it.

Great story! Kinda wish you’d let us know if time in jail made Arohas dad get sober long enough to see what he’d become and change his ways, if the female cop survived her wounds, if Todd had permanent brain damage or if he ever tried showing up again, and more detailed follow up on our heroines lives together. What can I say? Give me a good tale, I want more!

Cool story. Would have loved more at the end, but that is just greedy. Loved it. Thank you.

Enjoyed the story, ended too soon but I think that’s about all good stories I read. Did Aroha graduate? Because they made so much money did she quit?did the dad die?

This one meandered around to the right place. D

Another gem. I get so much enjoyment reading your stories. Thank you.

As always, your storytelling draws the reader in. I love how the character of the characters is evident and an integral part of the story. Thank you for sharing your gift.

Liked the story. Could have used a good going over before publishing. Still gave it 4*

Great story. We knew they'd end up together, but didn't know how it would happen.

Helluva story. What a great ride. 10-star work crammed into a 5-star system.

Hooked

Police procedural and a love story. 5* storytelling.

Wrong category. This belongs in non erotic.

Wonderful storytelling as always Cagivagurl. The characters felt so real that I had to keep remining myself that this was a work of fiction. Some loose ends at the finale but all in all a mighty fine read. Five stars from me.

You have an AMAZING gift for writing. My bucket list for 2023 is to read every single one of your stories. At present, I've only written 38 works but I plan to write a lot more. I have all these ideas in my head that I want to translate into stories for Literotica.com. Please continue to write more and I will continue to read all that you publish.

Great read. Like your writing.

That was an amazing story!! I was hooked from the beginning.

Nice story, well told, engrossing characters.

Congrats on another success.

A very enjoyable story although you might upset a few readers because there is no explicit sex. Well, this story is a very good example of a good story-line not needing an excess of sex, it stands very well by itself. You did miss a couple of chances to enhance the drama: firstly, what happened with Aroha's father? We know that he got three months inside---you could have made a good sub-plot about when he was released; similarly with the loathsome Todd. Still, they are just paths you could have taken. Whatever, I liked it as a whole.

I am very pleased at how the story developed. Slow, long, well paced. As one comment said, we knew from the start. But oh the journey, such a wonderful journey.

THANK YOU

Loved it but it is a non sex story, you are such a good story teller please don't stop and if it hadn't been in this category I wouldn't have read it. So confused but would urge anyone who likes a good story to read you, thanks

But what happened to honey?!

Really good - would have loved the ending to go along a bit more. Once you got them together it was like the story ran out of steam. We didnt really get to enjoy them as a couple.

4* - good story, good development! Just a bit rushed at the end.

Fabulous story, could not put down🙏

Great story and I seldom read this category, but I like Cagivagurl stories. The urchin, Aroha, was a brat and got away with way too much. Everyone around her continually supported and fixed her bad decisions. There are consequences to everything, especially having a kid. Too bad she got bored. If someone went behind my back to my mom, to watch her kid for a month, she would have been gone. What happened to Dad?

Another great story from a great author. Loved the buildup to the two finally getting together. Five stars of course!

Very, very well told story!

Excellent.

Another great story from you. I really romantic story.

5stars

authenticity is all about research. In New Zealand the Police "Armed Offenders Squad" is used in firearms related incidents. They are not a standing unit but are drawn from the qualified rank & file cops on the whole. And only a few patrol cars have firearms in gun safes onboard. Otherwise an interesting read.

I enjoyed it, not easy writing about a foreign country, but, it worked for me, nice ending.

Really great romantic story. If your looking for sex however look elsewhere.

Painstaking detail and slow build up. I honestly didnt think the two of them were going to be together. So full marks

This was an excellent story. I am really glad they ended up happily together. It’s your story and I didn’t think that was where you were taking us. But it was so intriguing, I just kept reading to see what you had in mind. It was already an amazing story. I just enjoyed the ending more that you finished it as you did. Thanks for taking all that time for our entertainment and enjoyment.

You are just an expert in building a story, it captivates from the first page to the end

A very good story. 5 stars

Thank you

Cracking story with richly developed characters and terrific dialogue. You just seem to get better and better.

Always a winner. Love the characters you introduce to us and how fully you let us into their lives. 5 stars because i cant give 6

Absolutely fantastic story that I loved.

If you do another cop story one thing to bear in mind is that the police squad that deals with armed criminals are called the Armed Offenders Squad not the Armed Defenders ( I'm an old police firearms instructor)

I loved the characters and the dialogue was absolutely superb. I could hear the a cent as used by the Tanga Te Whenua.

Much Aroha to you for telling our stories

When I realized where you were, I had to use Google to see as many pictures of the caldera as I could find. An amazing part of the world. And a great setting for a great story.

I find it interesting (and sad) that humans in general know so little about their own world, that every first world country has third world regions that are so disconnected from the outside world they are not even part of the same century. Everyone knows about the American Ozarks, or the Australian Outback, or the Welsh Moors but this (and many other parts of NZ) are like little worlds all to themselves, not really knowing, or caring, about the rest of the world.

Stories like yours (and not just this one) shine a light on some rarely seen parts of one of the most unique countries on the planet, with such different human living conditions. Amazing.

Charli, what a brave girl, and the red cross signed across her head ….. if the lucky stars are up and some souls are meeting, even in real life, events like the car crash and the angel coming to your aid are happen ….. this open heart and trust is so special …… all the worst case scenario implemented here in this storie found one big wonderful happy ending, the big jump ….. just lovely this tale

And again ten hearts 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🍀✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

Well written, excellent storyline, great continuity, loved it! Thank you!!

This is one fine story. Thank you

Really, really enjoyed this. Great portrayal and realisation of the setting and society. I also admire how you left out sex pretty much entirely, yet it didn't matter in the slightest, nor did it spoil the story at all. Quite the opposite in fact. I wish I'd had the bravery to do that with a couple of mine.