All Comments on 'It Began in the Locker Room Pt. 03'

I hope there is more to come. I am enjoying this story very much. It seems like a real happening thing, and not just a story. Please keep writing for you have a good eye on how it comes across to your readers.

It would be nice to see how things went when they went to Ethan's fathers for dinner. I hope there might be a couple more chapters. It is nice to see stories where the characters don't have 10" cocks and don't shoot pints of cum. More realistic.

Love this story. But don’t care at all for the emerging dominate side of Ethan during sex. While it’s clear he loves Cam and is devoted to him, there is typically a disrespectful side to these dom stories. Barking orders, lopsided favors (sucking, licking, stripping, etc with no reciprocation). I’d love to see a more equal relationship and see Ethan bottom for Cam and really throw himself into having his dream man inside of him slamming his prostate!