All Comments on 'It Didn't Work Out Ch. 03'

Great series so far. I'm definitely anticipating chapter four.

It's one thing for a husband to want a little fling with the wife with another partner and be involved. It's a totally different game when emotions and love and long term commitments are involved. I see a total train wreck coming for hubby. He's caught up in his fantasies. She is caught up in Sian and it will develop into a loving relationship. The husband is risking everything for his jollies. I think the husband is being portrayed as a very simplistic jerk off who would love to see his wife with another woman and refuses to see his wife's point of view so that he can get the chance to see her with a woman. Sian is right. The cracks in Bridget's relationship are wider than the husband thinks. I hope he enjoys being single in the long run.

Ripley, I think you are smartly uncovering the differences between male and female POVs. How easy it is for us men to get trapped into our own imaginations. Projecting our desires onto the women in our lives, as if our wishes are real.

Confusing the fantasy imagery of porn as if those displayed the real life we would rather be living then the reality we must endure.

The story and characters draw me in. Dialogue is a little stilted (people generally talk in contractions). And the idea that any sane person would walk into this situation, as Sian did? Hard to believe. Nevertheless, you've drawn me in and I'm enjoying this story.

this is the most stupidest serious of stories I have ever read, I am not even sure I can keep on reading it I mean what kind of husband would agree to this

You have us spellbound, my female lover and submissive husband.

love Janice

Did I miss it or does Don never give his wife oral sex?

That was the best and most thought provoking so far.

The husband isn't just a fool, he's also an asshole for pushing his wife.

What a messed up story, the husband is the worst type of idiot, and having read many of your other works I can guess where this is headed. It's men like Don that give men a bad rap, he's got a beautiful wife and he's an idiot(or asshole may be a better term as another comment suggested. A relationship is a two-way work in progress, and he doesn't seem to get that. Bridget and Sian do, so who's going to win in end?????

Thanks for sharing and I am looking forward to seeing how it plays out.

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