All Comments on 'It Happened One Night'

I hope there will be more, I liked this a lot - reminded me of myself :-)

A couple of little errors, at one point calling Devin Matt not good to confuse him with your brother.

This was just plain bad.

A pleasant little story. Will there be more?

You put this in nonerotic, but it is erotic. It is understated, which makes it all the more interesting. Thank you for writing something different (i.e, interesting).

Liked this story - characters felt real and easy to relate to. Mom is quite perceptive as is Matt. Only Annie seemed oblivious to her "relationship" with Devin. Looking forward to seeing how Annie and Devin evolve. And as I also have watched classic movies, I enjoy the references - and appreciate ExoticaEroticaInsidaya's efforts to provide these. They add a little extra "spice" to the story.

title of site NON EROTIC

1 star

This story was well-written and begs for more! Thanks for writing-I enjoyed reading your work!