All Comments on 'It Just Is'

it is just a story what would you rather have the story go "i whiped out my 4 inche cock" ?

because it adds another element of disbelief to the story. Too many of these and the whole thing comes crashing down.

I've gone over the story 3 times and I see nothing about a 9" cock.

Did see something about the biggest cock I ever saw, but no 9".

What story did you guys read?

It was a nice easy to read story. To Hell with the 9" dick comments, I liked the twist.

First off, the person with the 9" was his friend Micheal. It does say it some where around the middle.

However, that not being my main point, this was a beautifully written piece, the relationship between characters was very well thought out, perhaps personal experience ~.^

Anyways, thank you, I very much enjoyed it.

Well written, but "I's" is not a word. "My" is the correct possessive. Likewise "It took Melissa and me" rather than "I" is correct. These kind of errors are a distraction to an otherwise enjoyable story.