All Comments on 'It Needed Doin' - Kiki Narvaez'

Kick ass and take names!

5

Great story! I enjoyed the afterword — great to get a glimpse inside the brain of another author. Looking forward to further INDications of new IND episodes.

Thanks for the ‘Afterword’. I love this ‘series’, and its characters, and look forward to more.

IMHO it doesn't HAVE to be a connected series. I was viewing it similar to SleeperyJim's "Conversations" series. Each one a standalone, but along a similar theme - something that needed doin'.

Anyway, just my $.02.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Ignoring all the "series" drama, it's a great story. Easy 5 stars. I'm surprised his wife wasn't cheating, but I think that move worked to enhance the story.

Your a hell of a writer. Thank you.

"Meirda," she said. "I got it backward again." Lol! If it wasn't a 5 already that secured it.

Up to now I've been impressed with this guy's output, but this is bad on so many levels I'm not even going to bother critiquing it.

I wouldn't bother if I were you, everything after the first part of this series, which was excellent, is garbled rubbish.

Tasty spicy fare.