by Wandering_Mongol
Wow... dark. Well done, just dark. I couldn't enjoy this one.
I hope I never get to that dark place where I would do what this man did.
Yes. A dark story, but well done.
Just thinking... What if some piece of human debris did that to my daughter?
Imagine if we all had easy access to that type of grinding machinery and knowledge of how to use it. I half expected the body to be tossed in next.
4 stars - I like it, but I do not love it and it should have happened a lot sooner.
Yes, it had to be done, but there are so many 'other' more effective methods of removing all the evidence. Plus there are so many 'other' ways to do it, without leaving the body behind. With no evidence, then the missing person is just forgotten, like they never existed in the first place. That would have been the preferred way to deal with this problem.
However, in this case, he was leaving behind a clear message to the other culpable 'perps', that their demise was coming in the not too distant future. For a patient, cautious EQUALIZER - it is always a great plan when you can instill a sense of fear in your prey - then they make silly mistakes and your job gets easier.
Vigilantes have always been behind the scenes in North American culture. When situations like this, get to be too uncomfortable for the surrounding population, 'something' gets done - outside the law of the land - but it ends the problem. It is also a warning to corrupt politicians, bureaucrats and law enforcement - they can be removed without too much difficulty, IF they cross that line in the sand.
You all have a nice day now ya hear!
Only way to eliminate a shitstain like Ross. Now his family needs to be dealt with. They're as much of a problem as Ross was.
Nice. But bullets are so yesteryear. Chemicals and other exotics are the way to go now.
Definitely a 5 star, but regardless of the former marriage, this one is in the wrong category. Oh well, justice is served at least a little.
Ski got only deer shit. He's a good man, who would make a better sheriff than the current one.
Good read . Well written .
Title says it all . 4 * . Thanks for posting , come back soon .
Wish the asshole uncles would get offed in next pages or next chapters, please. 5 stars.
*****That was cold shot in the azz while dear hunting. Vengeance served. Thanks for sharing.
I know of something similar, it happed in a real redneck city. Seems there was a man that would get drunk and for years beat on his wife, kids and anyone else who crossed him. He would do this every time he could get drunk.
It was truly amazing when one night in a drunken rage he had a come to Jesus moment, felt so guilty for all of his sins that he committed suicide by shooting himself 3 times in the back with a single shot .410 shotgun. At least that is the way the cops wrote it up, I've read the report.
If only it was easily possible to eliminate people of this sort, I have a HUGE list of people who need to be Dead. But in these days of ubiquitous cameras, etc... it take a great deal more planning. Oh well I'm resigning to a world of walking, talking society controlling shit heads.
It wasn’t that long ago that “he needed killing” was a semi-legitimate defense in Texas. 5*.
Justice served. As a friend used to say “ the only reason some people are alive is because it’s illegal to kill them.”
If someone says they have a huge list of people who needs killing, then odds are they are the asshole in life who needs it
GOOD, hope he gets away with it and the shitstain deserved it. Too bad about Sheely, his ex-wife and now a cripple.
I wouldn't even care that he was family. He was a stain on humanity. Case closed, hunting accident.
Almost great. Ended too soon without final resolution. Who as Ski and how was he involved? Frankowski?
Would be nice to see uncles get justice they allowed ross to destroy lives and protected him
The father isn’t going to Hell. He stopped Evil from harming more people. If he’s accountable for anything, it’s the same as his wife, and everyone else in the county: that they didn’t do anything about the corrupt family a long time ago. Every single person in that family needs to “disappear”!!!
ZK
He should go after the uncles. Sad that he didn’t do something sooner. I can understand his anger at his wife; would be interesting to explore that dynamic a bit further.
I'm a nerd. What WAS the rifle ?
Oh, and there's still more chores to do. Some uncles who could have stopped this before it got this far.
To the person who asked what the rifle was, my first guess would be .300 Win Mag. Which means not a cheap rifle. But for a father, a worthy sacrifice to make.
Great that shitstain is dead, hopefully the family corruption is removed too. To bad he listened to his wife to many times. Now his daughter will be permanently handicapped because he failed to act when he should have. He would have died after beating her the first time.
What happened to your other story about a job offered to a wife where she has to sleep with boss? Part 1. I was really looking forward to it
Yes, sometimes things get handled in the Hill Country. Justice is often served “cold”. 5*
Actually, a ‘30-‘06 is a fine deer rifle. But I suspect, from the description that a .300 Win mag, or a .338 Lapua would have left more of an impression. LOL!
No sniper (or hunter) is going to carry a rifle with the telescopic sight detached and mount it just before firing. EVERY time the scope is removed from the rifle and reinstalled, the zero is lost (Hollywood gets it wrong, too!). Accurate shooting depends entirely on an established zero of the scope.