All Comments on 'It Never Goes Away'

Lovely story. Really beautiful to see where the lyrics took both you as the author and me as a reader. Kudos.

A beautiful story. So well written.

It toyed with my emotions.

Fantastic story!

5

Thank you for this wonderful story. Keeping Sky's loss until later in your story was perfect. The sense of loss of their loved ones by both Molly and Sky was touching and heart felt. The pain was realistic and understandable. The instant love between the two of them was believable and realistic. Overall this was a well crafted romantic story with a happy ending. K

I can't give any less than full marks.

I'm biased though because I love this family and this story arc and I can't get enough.

Although the sushi and the mysticism were no help.

Great story!

5

My new favorite story! (5*)!

A story worth telling, Thank you, a first responders life is not easy or safe, we owe

a great debt to all of them. Thank you for the glimpse.

Engaging characters and a good story line. It makes me glad for my family.

Thank you for your hard work

Woodmanone

That's the only way to describe this helter-skelter story. None of the flow makes any sense. What earthly reason is there for Abby in the story? How does Sky abruptly fall in love with Molly when I didn't hear anything at all about what she was really about - just superficial beauty and a shine in her eyes. It sounded to me that Abby had a lot more spunk even if she didn't have shiny eyes. Maybe this is a story about very shallow people who have a great family, but haven't got much besides family, good looks and jobs very low on the intellectual totem pole. I like to be able to root for someone and I couldn't find anyone I really liked. The Ryan thing was completely unnecessary. As was all the BS about angels and other supernatural drivel. 2*

Just keep geting better and better. 5 is your norm now.

A wonderful story, very heartwarming.

Though somewhat predictable, the story was told in a captivating fashion. Nicely done.

Overcritical is an idiot. I loved the story. It had the perfect amount of love, misunderstanding, disappointment, and angelic intervention. Tears on the screen.

But he still went overboard. As usual, I might add.

The storyline was very good, but... You have NO understanding of PTSD!! And this is really the problem within the story. To have two people with basically the same problems meet? Unique!! I feel you let yourself down. As for the family interferance - well that was way over the top. The Sushi reconcilliation - give us a break here - there are a lot better ways t achieve that objective than decorating a lovely lady with fish bait - isn´t there?

VBR

19pvc44

I was invested in the story, found it well written and engaging, until the sushi. I know this is literotica and people expect sex, but jesus christ, he sees some sushi, just forgets the hurt, and goes all in? Where was the little bit of back and forth, maybe not be so predictable? The rest of the story was good, except for that speed bump. Keep up the good work.

Very nice.

An engaging story

There were some severe bumps along the way, but when two hearts align, can anything really keep them apart? Mara seemed to be the who held the king and queen of hearts in her hand. Thanks for posting.

on Lit. This is my second reading and I don't remember if I left a comment before but I should have. Very, very, well done.

Good plot line, great characters and a feel good story.

Thanks for the hard work.

Woodmanone

That this story is part of a Lit event so maybe I didn't read it before. It must have been one of your other works that I read.

None the less this is a very good, feel good story and I enjoyed it.

Good job.

Woodmanone

It was good but honestly the whole sushi thing just annoyed the hell out of me. It's all okay because they have sex? Please. I come from a family that is way into people's business. They do shit like this and it causes more problems than it helps.

Molly had issues with grief and fear, all very understandable problems given her past.. She needed help to overcome that. Ghosting the problem wouldn't fix it. Intervention by family wouldn't fix it. A sushi fuck certainly wouldn't fix it. Everyone was too busy trying to push everyone into a direction THEY wanted. Abby calling Sky a pussy should have resulted in him leaving and to hell with dinner. A much more convincing resolution would have been him leaving, Molly getting help and then several months later they reconnect. The whole sushi, sex and all is forgiven felt forced and artificial

Great romance story. 5 stars!!!

WOW!!! What a story.... now I have to read all the tie in stories LOL.... good job...

Another great story. Thank-you!

Thank you for a very special story. Firefighters are heroic people who don't always get the attention they deserve. Angels have a special place in my heart as well. Wish it could be more but 5*.

somewhere east of Omaha

Although I do admit I skimmed the sushi part as I don't like sushi. Unlike some of the other commentators I liked the connection to Rebecca.

Fantastic story. More than 5 stars.

You have become one of my favorite authors. So many stories interconnected you have the making of an life novel. So.e of the stories leave me questioning, Eaay Thing, but all have been entertaining. Keep on keeping on.

Thanks, DP

Third time I've read this story and it gets better each time!

Possibly your best effort yet!

Abby is an annoying bitch and it is good Sky told her off!!

Molly needs Counselling!!!

The sushi but was so over the fucking top - the mental basket Molly should have sloken first but I guess it is an example of a man thinking with his dick.

Good story but those family interventions and bitchy Abby was overdone!!

What next, a sushi threesome with Sky, Molly and Abby

A bit cloying and too cute for my taste. Glad so many others enjoy your style. Keep up the good work,

And thanks for the effort.

The dumb bitch Molly needs therapy

Abby is a bitch and Sky shouldnt have been so forgiving for the prying bitch Abby and her over the top family. The sushi drama was so over the top, actually ridiculous!! Story would have fared better if he did not go for dinner and Mental Molly would have to go look for him.

I honestly don't know why half you commentors bother to read. If it's not scorched earth every time you guys think a dude has been wronged "no matter how little" you complain. Seriously, how small are you?

Great story and a great family dynamic. Jesse and Sarah are still my fav of all your couples but Frank and Ali are amazing as well.

He should have left, I don't think he should have gone scorched earth but he gave her every chance and only after he decided to move did she change her mind. That's too late, he should have left town. 3*

This is about the 4th time I have read this story. I can not see the negative. I liked it the first time and each time I reread it I Tried to see the negative points but all the so called problems seem minor I have been reading your work for a while and so far it is very hard for me to find any ground shaking errors I can't wait for more. As for the family in this story you could not do better. At my age all the sex in these literotica stories to me is "Been there, done that, own the tee shirt." With 3 ex-wives and numerous Girlfriends it is the romance I miss the most.

Great story well told. This is the stuff that dreams are made of.

Thanks

The only type of person, who would not like this story, believe in QAnon!

man my allergies are acting up! misty eyed the whole way through

One Hell of a story 10 stars if I could give them

Just as amazing as I expected, seeing the author's name.

Being a retired firefighter, I can empathize with Molly’s feelings, as my wife had those same fears while I was on the job. A very well written story in all aspects, just as the rest of your stories are.

Find the sushi inspired change of mind over the top.She avoids him for weeks and all of a sudden sets up the sushi feast,doesn't work for me.

Geeze u write some awesome rear jerking stories. Great job 5 stars all the way.

So we’ll written, I had tears.

You are doing better. I love the stories but you could have put them in order because we’re. It getting exposed to them as we should have been. Good story and well integrated. Keep up the good work. MtM

What a fucked up end!! Abby was a BITCH to call out Sky when her sister had issues and even worse was to have the psychotic bitch dresses in sushi to entice him and fuck him instead of talking!! FAMILY FUCKING INTERVENTIONS were a joke!! Sky deserved better than a freak Molly

I have lost count as to the number of times I have read and re-read this story in the last year,

I still think it is a great story.

I still think it is worth 10 stars!

Such a great story, and wonderful cap to that family's story. It was at turns lovely, sad, and touching. Really a great job.

I love this story. The suspense was very well written. Keep up the great storytelling! Really loved the large family. Brings back good memories of my family!

Very good story...fire/ems/law enforcement are not easy professions for wives and parents....my dad worried about me for 20 years. I'm retired now and have helped bury several of my brothers in service. Still family. NM FF/EMT

It was a good story until you got to a confused insecure Molly at the end and the lies to get Sky to the sushi covered bitch. They grew up to be bitches too. Jesse thinks he's God's gift to humanity

Excellent story⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️