All Comments on 'It Only Gets Better'

I can't believe no one has comment on this story before now. You have created a grand plot with well described characters and interesting personalities. The dialogue is right on, and you've described the various environments so that the reader can feel as if he or she was there. The continuously unfolding of the story captured my interest and there was no way I wasn't going to finish. Well written and worthy of high praise.

Mahalo