All Comments on 'It Only Took Twenty Years Pt. 01'

This has all the hall marks of a five star tale. I'll read on with anticipation.

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Hot! Did I mention hot! BTW, amazingly hot!

For not having any "sex" in the story so far, it's just so sexy as can be. What a buildup. Hoping there's a happy ending to this thing, guess I'll just have to keep reading. Very well done story, very entertaining and I love that Dawn was wearing briefs instead of a f****ng thong. Thanks.

Well done, sweet and sexy. 5*

This is probably the tenth time I have read this story, and it gets me every time.

My second time around reading this, it hasn’t lost any of the impact I recall from the first time round, if anyone ever searched for a “How To” on ratcheting up sexual tension in a story, they should find this as the most fitting example. 5/5 WillDevo, many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.