All Comments on 'It Only Took Twenty Years Pt. 03'

I was so upset by the ending of chapter 2 that I kind of did a rant of my disappointment. This chapter of the story is a vindication of WillDevo for that ending. All I have left to say is, you got me, just as you did William. LOL

Reading this story makes me a little sad because I think of when I got married. We were both so young and the little head was always doing the thinking so it was more lust than love. As we got older the love became more important, like Will and Dawn, where we could just enjoy each other. Sometimes it was just cuddling and holding that was enough.

I'm so looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks for an awesome story.

I really enjoyed it until they pissed in the swimming pool. I'm not against water games but getting a mouthful of some stranger's urine is disgusting, not to mention hat one might catch.

This should be labeled as a fetish story. Not my cup of tea. I’m disappointed; after reading some of your wonderful stories, I did not expect this.

This part was just a waste of words.

I would have carved out time to see my PA in hospital by now. Bad boss!

Seriously. He should have gone right to the hospital to check on his assistant.

I confess that I was upset he didn’t go and see his assistant, who took a beating for something he’d done, along with the pissing in a public swimming pool! That is beyond gross and not something that needs publicising in a positive, albeit knowingly wrong, manner. I expected better WillDevo.