by Voboy
love it,thank you and this foreboding happyness to meet this brave loving elfgirl again - on her path brings up my fantasy to life,while beeing on the road or during work or in my dreams. magic is real, thilo from germany
Good adventuring yarn. Fun characters. Kept me engaged the whole time. 5/5
Your story brought Leinyere to life. Great characters, dialogue, and drama. I enjoyed the blooming romance between Molley and Fewnick, but I think I like Gelson and Lady Penfold more. If the former can settle down and the latter can respect him, then they could have quite the alliance.
Altogether, a wonderful fantasy adventure tale.
Incredible! Reading through the first page I was afraid it would be a short chapter and hoping for more. Nine pages! Absolutely incredible. Wonderful band of characters, love their development. Can't wait for their next adventure. Definitely should quit your day job and figure out how to get paid to write these stories full time.
Such a rich world, rich characters. You created a truly wonderful, enjoyable story!
I first was interested in the story due to the title. I have often said that there is no downside to being nice. I truly enjoyed the story. Well told
Hey, wow! This was really good! I loved it! Great characters, excellent dialogue, and just an overall nice writing style.
Really did a nice job setting the scene, fleshing out the characters, and preparing a whole heap of storylines…I hope you’re planning to build upon this excellent foundation! Want to know more about all of Gelsen’s crew, Molley’s past, hat happens to Lord Dumba$$, Why the Orcs are attacking now, and so much more!