All Comments on 'It Runs in the Family'

OMG - Please Sir can W/we have some more. Great scene setting and build-up leaving the potential for countless possible scenarios. A nice slow build-up instead of the all too frequent straight into things story! Good characters without physical description leaving those details to the readers imagination - thus enhancing the story!! PLEASE continue!!!! Looking forward to the next story.... Anon female UK x

Please continue with this story line. I to have fantasies about Incestial BDSM. The build up of the characters and the way you got the sister involved with out being overt about it was great and exciting. I would like to know what happens when he returns from breakfast, also when Mom returns. Will the son dominate his mother and sister?

Looks like an interesting story line that should be continued.

We were both blown away by this story, it seems to encompass so many of the things that we enjoy so much. we had to reenact this as part of a role-play almost as soon as we read it, superb, keep up the good work.

To anyone interested i am back on lit as of late March '10 and I'm hoping to edit this story a little and then add to it. Should have a new chapter by mid April or thereabouts.

Thanks for all the positive feedback- constructive criticisms and ideas for development are still appreciated either as PMs or as comments.

Another great story from the new guy. I cant wait to see you write some more

needs a sequel , when his mother and sister both submit to him , together . Thanks , Ed

Really enjoyable. Very erotic. Need mom to join in next please.

This was such a good story. I really love the way you let the characters build up before descending into debauchery. My only criticism is that the brother went very quickly from saying no to giving her what she wanted. Other than that, though, I would say that it's perfect.

Man, I wish you'd start writing again!