All Comments on 'It’s a Brave New World Ch. 04'

Love this story!

Hopefully the next chapter will be here a bit quicker?

Thanks! Glad you like it. I'll do my best to keep updating.

I read all the series so far yesterday. I liked them a lot. I kind of thought he might get rich reverse engineering his phone somehow but the mysterious events at the end of this last chapter put a damper on that. His father's family should probably be in the world he is in now if it is his father's original home world. Also it is not that unusual to have a charger on you along with the phone, just saying.

Really loving this story, nice fresh premise, hoping you update soon

Speculative fiction, done surprisingly well, combined with believeable, outright erotic porn. What's not to love? Oh, right: the cliffhanger...

I just can't help but be a bit wary; it hints at an intricate mystery story to come, but I've too often been disappointed by shallow stories or boring, simplistic resolutions following great cliffhangers -- but I have high hopes that you'll manage to pull it off!

Really enjoying this story so far. Keep it up!

Jason shiuld definitely bond with Mandy & Cindy too. I wonder if three girls cann get bonded with the same guy & due to him being an alien, bonds shouldn't lead to monogamy as suggested like pale plaguehumans.

His strange biology may even create a feedback loop causing girls to bond with him permanently.

P.S. thanks for not giving every girl a bush and hairy pits.

Oops. I understand the value of a truncated warning message, but that's not how email works. This is the equivalent of "The Castle of Augh" scene in Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Otherwise, this is a fun story. I enjoyed this literally steamy chapter.