All Comments on 'It’s Only Being Photographed Pt. 01'

by westjayne495

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You’ve begun the journey

Loved your first story and the way it’s developing. Can’t wait for more. Exciting!

MaonaighMaonaighover 4 years ago
MILF-net

Sounds like Sophie has an invisible MILF-net and is playing it as skilfully as any fisherman. And you have stopped at exactly the right place with an intriguing cliff-hanger. The story is nicely erotic so far, so keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Cannot wait for part 2

Love the story

FriskyMindFriskyMindover 4 years ago
Loved it!

The slow build up was fantastic. Flirting is an art, and seduction isn’t always a fast game. I’m 56 so it’s always nice to see more mature characters showing that our sexual, sensual side doesn’t die at 30. I did whimper when I reached the end of page 2 and there was no page 3. Sincerely hope to see it soon!

RastanuraRastanuraover 4 years ago
Excellent

I loved the build up and can't wait for the rest.

shane81ukshane81ukover 4 years ago

Excellent, loved the pace and the reality of it.

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice beginning

I just took a break and read part 1. I was saving it for later at night but couldn't resist. I loved the slow buildup and the reluctance of Jayne. Hopefully, I can wait until later for the best part. I'll be thinking of it all evening though. Very good and thank you!

maribel_fmaribel_fabout 4 years ago
Deliciously tantalizing!

Title says it all, really. By the time I got to the end I was feeling lovely tingles of anticipation!

Love

Marixxx

bbaron2274bbaron2274over 2 years ago

I've always dreamt of being photographed. Being told what to do.......Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fucking awesome !!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lovely story, sweet and so sexy. Well done. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Really promising opening. Love the slow building tension. Can't wait for Jay to start her exhibitionist/ sapphic journey. Breaking down inhibitions is so sexy. 5 stars

morning31_bmorning31_babout 1 month ago

Lovely warm up, like the teasing building up and ooo that comment about the leggy news night presenter ..... mmm

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