by westjayne495
Loved your first story and the way it’s developing. Can’t wait for more. Exciting!
Sounds like Sophie has an invisible MILF-net and is playing it as skilfully as any fisherman. And you have stopped at exactly the right place with an intriguing cliff-hanger. The story is nicely erotic so far, so keep up the good work.
The slow build up was fantastic. Flirting is an art, and seduction isn’t always a fast game. I’m 56 so it’s always nice to see more mature characters showing that our sexual, sensual side doesn’t die at 30. I did whimper when I reached the end of page 2 and there was no page 3. Sincerely hope to see it soon!
I just took a break and read part 1. I was saving it for later at night but couldn't resist. I loved the slow buildup and the reluctance of Jayne. Hopefully, I can wait until later for the best part. I'll be thinking of it all evening though. Very good and thank you!
Title says it all, really. By the time I got to the end I was feeling lovely tingles of anticipation!
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Marixxx
I've always dreamt of being photographed. Being told what to do.......Keep it up
Really promising opening. Love the slow building tension. Can't wait for Jay to start her exhibitionist/ sapphic journey. Breaking down inhibitions is so sexy. 5 stars
Lovely warm up, like the teasing building up and ooo that comment about the leggy news night presenter ..... mmm