All Comments on 'It Started As a Joke'

Great idea, fine pacing, perfect descriptions.

I’m usually fine with open endings, but ...

... more, please.

Well done, a great debut on the site.

more please

Excellent quicky! Another chapter? Well done.

This is going to be one of my go to fantasies now

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Great story! Can't wait to read what happens next

Mature women love young studs with large cocks. They are so turned off by their whimpy husbands little weenies that they fantasize fucking well hung young men.

Awesome story. Just one more paragraph as they get themselves back together?

Definitely looking forward to more!

5* from me.

The story's been told before

BUT this felt so fresh, well done.

I've been on the site for 6 years, you are my 3rd Favourite Author ever.

Hoping for part 2

Is there a follow-up?

Well done. Seriously, please continue. I can't imagine how good you'll be after some more experience.

Great original storyline very well written. Thanks for sharing.

very nice

Good premise.

Rushed.

"And with that she finished pulling out my cock and went down on me." That's it? No details? No enjoying the look of his cock? It's feel in her hand? No playing/jerking it a while? All of a sudden cock is out of his pants and into her mouth. Details. Details. Details.

Two stars.

Good premise.

But sex happens much too fast. Starting. Happening. Ending. What's the rush?

Needed more details. Needed more foreplay. Needed more descriptions of body parts.

Four stars.

Mark seems a mature young man -- maybe Phyllis can see his chest and notice the start of sexy chest hair the muscular chest? A sexy sight on any guy!

Is there a pot for 6 stars?

More please