All Comments on 'It Started As a Joke Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh yes, this just gets better and better. More please

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperover 2 years ago

These lovers are so beautifully intense together, and I appreciate the way they slowly got to this point!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

please continue with more

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

*****Damn that was HOT. Great follow-up glad you are feeling better. Looking forward to Part 04. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fantastic….I need more!!

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Wow, now that's hot a hell. Kidnapped by a mature MILF with a Hotel room. Can't wait for more.

Blueman5410Blueman5410over 2 years ago

You have an amazing talent for writing incredibly hot and passionate scenes/ plots. I WISH I could write half as well! Keep going...oh and glad you have recovered from covid! Write on🙂

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Damned steamy, sensual, sexual and captivating story; hope it continues on and on and on . . . Great job, Author!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fucking like only the imagination can detail. Excellent, Author!

DessertmanDessertmanabout 1 year ago

Exciting story but needs editing too many spelling errors and missing words.

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