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by DarkDddy

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DalhawkDalhawkover 6 years ago
Liked it, but...........

I see this all the time. It's "taut" stomach, not "taught." Not sure why writers make this mistake over and over. s

DarkDddyDarkDddyover 6 years agoAuthor
Dalhawk

Dalhawk You're absolutely correct. I didn't catch that, thank you.

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