All Comments on 'It Started with a Kiss'

but is that it?

Sorry, yes. I can't see where I could take this story any further. That is why the ending is as it is. Sometimes a story is just a one off and not part of a series.

This is different and i'm sure lots of readers aren't going to like the lack of a happy ending, but it is real, well written and i very much liked it. I see a comment asking if this is it, you could leave it, i couldn't. Thanks for this.

We all love happy endings, however must realize that on many occasions the opposite happens. I feel this was an excellent story, well written with varying emotions and represents a "real life occurrence (s)"!! It reminds me of the old saying, play with fire and you will likely be burned.

I agree with the Author, that it would be difficult to take this story any further, since it works well as a 1-off. However, I certainly would not enjoy reading continuing chapters on the enduring pain of Libby's / Denise's decision affecting the lives of their families, as well as their guilt.

Their decision was made and now lets move on to a "New Story"!!

Definitely A 5*-Star Rating

It just confirms that the LGBT community is nothing but lust . When a person lust that much to where Your going to leave your kids ..then tell them your a lesbian now and leave them for another lesbian .. just lost all your woman values .. it’s sad shallow women out there taking satans oath

bro you read the lesbian sex story ffs stop having a double narrative and bring a hypocrite

A long time ago, I had to choose between two women I loved, neither one willing to share. I have never forgotten the one I didn't choose and asked myself for a long time if I had made the right decision; ceasing to worry that question was difficult. Each of us have grandchildren now and I sometimes wonder if the not-chosen one ever thinks of me.

What a cost. I hope both families abandon the slags.

Stupid whores.

Oh get a life folks! This is fiction! It’s just a story! If you don’t like it fine, move on to the next one!!

I 'd prefer a happy ending, but fine. What I CAN'T believe are those sanctimonious comments by three hypocrites who, after all, ARE reading lesbian erotica, FICTION at that. Why not write a sequel with both families singing kumbaya? Give me a break!

Storm1752

At what point is a a (plot device) a manifesto. I say this because many stories in this section share similar themes.

-Men are evil

-Turning straight women gay

-Breaking apart a family

-Lesbianism is women's antidote to trauma

You are correct the story is fiction but the inspiration/sentiment stems from something real

She mused about why men don't like to eat pussy!

Dear reader, what planet is she living on?

Just selfishness - no matter how you spin it. It's a twisted mind and a bent heart, wanting it your own way no matter the hurt and damage you do to others.

C'mon people, don't lie, don't try to water it down - show some mental integrity at least. Trying to pretend it's not cheating because it's a woman instead of a man? That's just lame. Call it what it is. Cheating. Infidelity. Adultery. And yes, there will be accountability someday. (And maybe some karma, even before then...)