All Comments on 'It Started with a Work Party...'

You do know that your MC and the boss are now rapists in the eyes of the law, right? Intoxicated people can't give consent, especially for "forcing my dick in". Maybe put this type of shit in Non Con at least. Also, the writing had almost no detail, like it was written by a preteen, which I hope you're not. Hopefully, you'll improve, but for now, not a great score.

Wtf, this shit is rape

2,961 words, 75 paragrphs, 213 lines..and i still dont know what the wife's name is ?

This is FICTION, correct?

I suppose more than one guy has had fantasies of putting one over his wife with her boss.

Now does she go to AA?

Does she get a divorce?

Does dude marry the Boss?

Does ex-wife quit?

Or does everyone loosen up?

Good story, hoping for more to cum! Maybe Boss, and hubby can fuck while wifey is at AA meetings! Thanks for this one.

Likely a dead story (i.e. author not coming back). Decently written - a few tense issues with grammar and such, but not disruptive. Kind of a story mainly about three not super likable people, though. Two of them explicitly get off on the cheating / sneaking aspects, and one is just a grade A bitch.

Not my kink, but thanks for submitting!