All Comments on 'It Started with Pizza'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Abrupt!

The beginning is very long winded, the middle about right but the ending so rushed and abrupt!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
You wrote my biography

That is almost exactly how it happened: The innocent enough start, the timid kissing, then the dynamite sex, and the breakup.

I guess it happens.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Too bad he didn't get his balls cut off, then fed to the skanky wife to choke to death on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

dirtball

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