All Comments on 'It Started with the Holidays Ch. 01'

Definitely a 1

Might be an ok story, but so badly written, I could not finish it.

WTF all over does not make sense, poorly written

Who's telling it. Me, her, she, us...couldn't' tell who was doing what. Way too confusing

It was hard to understand I read it till the. The ending was horrible. The mom was mean to her daughter because she wanted her all those years and on night they get drunk and fuck. Not buying that. Sorry but I agree with the other poorly written.

The inconsistent perspective made it very confusing at times. That said, the fantasy of a dysfunctional mother and daughter finding emotional and sexual comfort with D/s kinks together is hot.

It seemed to me with the references to the Roseanne sitcom that this mom and daughter ( named Becky no less) seemed to be older versions of those characters from the show. You know an obnoxious, crass, self-centered mom with substance abuse issues (Roseanne) and a frustrated, alienated daughter with self esteem issues (Becky). And both seem to be stuck in a white trash trailer park lifestyle.