All Comments on 'It Takes Two'

I have you bookmarked so that I never miss your stories. This one did not disappoint. This is even better than your Kaya line of stories. I really appreciate how you kept things slow and didn't try to rush to the erotica. So many times, you read stories on this site that feel the need to throw in an anal scene and then try to get away with romantic tension between the characters later on. You didn't do that and I like that about you.

I wish the ending had been more definite. I sense that you didn't know how to end it so you left it open-ended. Honestly, I'm not sure how I would have ended it either.

I’m not a romance girl at all but I liked your Sabrina series and i LOVED this. Please write a part 2, maybe with Willow in it too

Left on the edge of the cliff. Great story. Please continue.5

I really enjoyed the story... until the ending, which left everything unresolved!

I also don't understand the "cuckquean" tag. Ken wasn't married to Willow, so he can't cuckold her. Also a cuckquean is usually a willing participant when the husband has sex with his lover... which also never happened.

It's difficult to have the reader invest in a character who they initially disliked.

Nice job. I look forward to part two.

You really get the cuckquean/vixen angle, and your stories are great to read. Can't wait for part two

Why did Mallory call Willow a slut if all she did was mope around the dorm and say catty things about other girls? What did she mean about it wasn't her plan anyway? What did Willow do at the cons she went to?

Liked the story. And.........

Kendrick the manwhore bastard and Mallory the bitch slut

Ken is a piece of shit and so is Mallory, they suck!