All Comments on 'It Was a Cold and Dreary Night'

A fun story and an easy read. Thanks for sharing. I hope you post more like this.

Grey Eagle:

There may some who'll scream about it being a formula story, ie; older man rescues young lady and they fall in love, so what? It makes a fine story especially to this Horny 'ol Sailor. Hell! I can dream can't I? Thank You. Ronnie W.

It would be a better story if you continue to recycle dialog and action from story to story.

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Most of the places where 'set' was used, it should have been 'sit'.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

Very wistful story.

I don't know what more I can add, except to say: I'm damned glad I found it. Five Stars!

BUT a little LOL-

I really liked this one too - you have a rhythm going - clearly -

But there is enough variety to the scenery to make it fun.

To survive a cold and dreary night...none better!

“ We had our breakfast and we both pushed on the door with no luck. I decided to crawl out the window and try to move some snow away from the door...”

That's why a lot of those cabins have doors that open inward.

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“ I told him (boyfriend) to get lost when he wouldn't go hunting with me. What a wimp, what did I ever see in him. I guess it was because I have known him forever."

If they’d known each other that long, he didn’t she liked to hunt? She didn’t know he didn’t like hunting? “Known him forever”, Really?