All Comments on 'It was a Dark and Stormy Redux'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
DSR - Oh Boy!

How to start? Love the premise, not new but certainly well supported. A little history, some language education, lots of sex, what's not to like? Clearly 5*!

AxelottoAxelottoover 3 years ago
What a ride!

That was well worth the time, thank you! .

Axelotto

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
WOW!

One ghost is the usual, your second ghost is better than pumpkin spice. And that’s just the starter. I hope you win the contest with this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Unique

Fantastique

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 3 years ago
Avenged

Need to find out how to avenge their deaths.

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this and would’nt mind

reading more with these three characters.

Thanks

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Great Build Up ....

... but I thought the ending was a little rushed. IMHO more could have been made of bringing Beth on board and into the threesome. However this was excellently crafted and could definitely do with another chapter or two, ideally getting revenge on the count, if that is possible.

My education continues in both English (uxoricide), French and Polish although still having difficulty in tracking some words down.

john_sixfooterjohn_sixfooterover 3 years ago
Wonderful!

Great buildup, and once you got going, you kept accelerating! Massive fun!

Yes, please, run with this story, add more stories like this!

Wanton slut! I haven't heard that in ages!

Your vocabulary had me looking up more words than I should admit, especially the French! My first wife was French, but she never taught me the dirty words.

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
One or the best

This is definitely one of the best stories in this genre I have ever read.

Rainbow88Rainbow88almost 3 years ago

Very hot. The acceptance of the 2 witches was a good twist especially with a human female the correct age to add future inheritors to keep the home fires burning. Also lovely sex scenes, just enough human behavior paired with just enough magic.

rayironyrayironyalmost 2 years ago
Guffaw! 5 * ! I would have sit you've gone over the top with this

But on looking at the ending positions , we've gotta be 1000 yards on down the backside slope.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

From what I thought would be maybe one or two pages, this story turned into an absolute favorite. I had to laugh when I got to the part where Jacquie stated "Americans 'ave not spoken English in two 'undred years?". Never heard that one or the "where God left his sandals" but I will have to remember both and use them for my own, lol. The one part of the story that was kind of a downer was when Mike was talking about the bunker and the Cuban Missile Crisis. I was in the Navy at that time and it sure made me feel old as hell. Otherwise, the story is a solid five stars. Thanks

Polly_DollyPolly_Dollyabout 1 year ago

Better than good! Imaginative tale, hot sex scenes, and delightfully droll, what’s not to like?

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I'm sorry I finished and submitted the latest Spark story so close to the Geek Pride deadline that it was delayed and missed the 25th. However, it is now published. I hope those who have been enjoying the series continue to do so with this latest offering. *~*~*~*~* I keep fo...

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