All Comments on 'It Wasn't My Fault'

He started to show some backbone and then completly wimped out. When you encounter your wife cheating you dont crawl away and cry, you confront the bitch. Just because she is fucking your boss you dont resign, you wait for him or her to sack you and then sue them for unfair dismissal. And finally, i would have taken the company car and then let them worry about getting it back when I reached my destination, catch the Greyhound thats bullshit. Matt you are good writer, give us some burn the bitch stories.

SAD, SAD, story. Shit, now I am depressed. Shit, mental note to my self...not to read any more of your stories. Dude, lighten up, and wright some angry shit or something, stop being a pussy.

Your either really gay or really prudish. As a woman I know my man would be happy to have another woman join us. The sex scene well there is none just saying smell of sex.He had sex with her before going to work.I don't see anyone just leaving w/out even knowing anything without even fighting he must not have even liked the wife or boss cause you change from the 2 women being worried bout him to telling him to bugger off

are you a woman? Because the man in this story talked like a woman. The dialogue was stilted and he seemed to lack any understanding of what power he had over them. That silly excuese that the whole world would know he was cuckoled is just that: silly. Talk about misuse of authority. His lawsuit could probably close the company and embarass both women. You owe us a more reasonable ending unless you really are a woman and you think a man would talk and react like that and that those women could get away with this.

Welcome to real life! Several poor decisions, which is also a fact of life. Personally, I would not leave a perfectly good job. Go into work and treat the boss the same as always. If she wants to fire you, fight it! Don't get into, or allow, discussions with your boss about your or her or Sweetie's personal life!

But ... start looking for an equally good (or better) job in an environment more conducive to peace of mind! Hard to determine whether losing a wife to a better (at least in Sweetie's mind) man is easier to get over than to a woman!

As interesting as the "join 'em" suggestion is to consider, the 'Bull?' being Hubby's boss puts the kibosh on that life-style adjustment!

Serious editing problems keep this fine read out of the 5* group!

4*

well MB pulled more than a few chains. but seriously, it was a great story until hubby wimped out and gave the cheating slut his house and her lover got him to quit his job. that was where it sucked big time.

What the fuck was that? I sure hope Matt is not your true name because I don't know how anyone but a woman could have wrote this garbage!?

...or at least make them pay.

I liked it. LW stories are supposed to be about cheating and divorces. There were both in this story. This story is probably far closer to what can and does happen in the real world than a lot of the burn the bitch stories or the reunion stories are. What I liked most is that this story tells the truth. Sometimes things are just SHITTY. Sometimes no matter how good a husband you are or how much you love her it just DOESN'T WORK OUT. Sometimes the good guys LOSE. Great job Matt!

this is the worst story you have written no ending no feel and no point i dont expext a torch the bitch but do expect a good story

... doesn't mean I agree with their attitude/s, what they do, or how they handle situations.

First, the guy from Spain reads the story and then accuses Americans of being wimps, even though the story is written by, and is about Brits (it says so right in his name - MattblackUK). Then the Americans get accused of writing all the BTB comments even though the guy from Spain and another European both posted BTB posts.

Doesn't anybody read anything anymore, or are they so caught up with their petty jibes that scoring points is more important than actually reading and responding to either the story or the comments? Pretty sad.

1. You see two naked women in your bed -you take photos- you take off your clothes and surprise them. If they resist, you act like you don't understand and just keep going. If they get up and leave, you act confused, like you don't get it. In essence you insinuate yourself into their relationship. The next thing you do is to get your boss to give you a raise and favorable treatment at work because she is fucking your wife. If she fires you, you sue for sexual harassment! Sweet deal! Can one of you authors do a rewrite over here?

2. Toss a lighted cigarette into a pile of papers by the bed, sprinkle the bed with vodka and you will have another one of those terrible tales of what happens to people who smoke in bed. (get it? Literally burn the bitch(es)! Yeah Baby!

3. Like cancer, you slowly destroy their lives. You ruin the bitch bosses business - maybe even steal the clients and start your own company. You expose their perverted homosexuality to their families and the internet for fun, profit and revenge! You set your boss up with a really hot hooker and get pictures to share with your wife. Oh the possibilities are endless! Fuck with their minds if you can't have their bodies! Drugging them and leaving them in compromising situation is fun too!

Remember, When you were born God tossed you in the ring and said FIGHT! Until you stop breathing Remember to FUCKING FIGHT! There will be plenty of time to be dead in the future. So get up off your ass and kick some ass!

Ignore the racist Yank and his 'Limey' comment, all the 'feedback', anonymous of course, always that, or shit (as most rational people would refer to it), in this category comes from that side of the Atlantic anyway! They like to think that they are such 'he-men' over there, all guns and spit and such. Unlike him, I'd like to see where this goes and how it develops. I hope there are further instalments?

I don't usually jump on the bandwagon, but this is some utter bullshit. The first night him leaving after finding them in bed together, I'll give you that. He was in shock and a natural response is to get away from the situation. On the other hand the second day, because he didn't want to be embarrassed? So he just leaves town. That's not logical for someone who is wronged. As far as "rape" in the divorce is concerned, he held that card, not her. What sounds worse? A faithful husband wronged by his wife and his boss, who are having a lesbian affair? or .... well I really can't think of anything that makes the two cheaters look even decent. I am NOT trying to tell you what to do, but if I were you I would do an ALTERNATE version.

Bullshit. He's got the grounds for one hell of an alienation of affection suit. Of course, you have him be such a wimp, have him just sleepwalk through everything, you'd probably have him not realize HE'S the one who could "rape" (to use your term) her in the divorce.

you can fuck me over and I just accept it ? just because it was a woman instead of a man ? oh really anything lamer than that and you'd be a snail.

So...unmitigated, cowardly, Limey bullshit!!!

You ended the story half way through. Finish it, and it will be much better.

Just a really stupid mixed up story. It went no where.

story was to short and this poor guy gave up on himself. i know a guy whose wife took him to the cleaners after 35 yrs together and he gave her everything and he is a good guy and i cant fiqure out what made him such a wimp

Therefore these comments cramfull of hatred and fundamentalism.

Put it to better use. Let's say that he's a good man deep down. Nothing wrong with not wanting to hurt other people. There was a slash of nobility, or so he imagined, in his actions. Let's hope in chapter 2 he recovers his senses.

The shocking and brilliant moment in this flash was when the wife agreed she wanted a divorce and the boss thought it'd be best if he resigned. Nasty. Loved it.

But I see what you're doing with the story. You want us to be disgusted by what's going on. I was. I enjoyed the car crash crap Thanks for writing 4*

You seem to have taken an entire story to say "life sucks and then you die." Wow, that's original. Next time, don't bother.

Too incomplete, no set up, no dimension to chararacters--like this sentence without a verb.

No real man here! Guys a loser. A real man would love to find his wife with another woman. Especial if he gets to watch and join in

Most are from idiot BTB freaks from across the pond who wouldn't recognise a realistic scenario if it bit them on the ass. Not all human males react by reaching for a shot gun! The US is a seriously worrying place.

I am afraid people will know i lost my wife to my female boss you two can stay together and people will know i lost my wife to my female boss. I will take nothing but my clothes, u can have all i have earned. Jeez get a life. Throw both sluts out and keep the house, sue the boss and take over the company in the aftermath. Totally inept as a story. BTW where was the loving wife in the story?

No wonder his wife left him for a woman. I wonder if he has a dick?

Have sone, it encourages strong bones, like a spine.

a sad and depressing story - but well constructed.

Needed editing. If I am complaining about editing then you know it was stupid mistakes. Second what does it matter what other's thing. You moved the character eight hours away, divorces don't make the evening news so sue the bitch. There was no tension in this story. I gave it **.

Not sure why you even bother to write at all. A quick look at your other stories shows a trend of weak men in each story. Either your trying to make it seem like all men are weak to compensate for your own many short comings or your really a women that hates men using a male pen name. Don't really care though as this will be the last story of yours i will read.

Story was written well. Left a dismal sensation though, as the husband would have caused more damage to his boss and her company then the little albeit non-descript swipe at his ego. Still you have the readers talking so that is a win unto itself.

I feel the story was just a tad flat. Maybe more character fill as to why the wife was so easily seduced. And one final reflection. The wife went from declaring profound love of her husband, to suddenly having profound love for the woman. WTF??

Anonomous:

People who think the husband should be allowed to kill a cheating wife, often include a wife who was raped as well, apparently both are, I don't know, impure?

It would at least be balanced if the wife could kill the husband, (Equal rights)

This sort of thing is so far from modernity it is hard to imagine it.

To the author:

About the story, the husband is weird! He about placed a sign on his back "kick me,"

Not a good read unless you like the cuck/wimp fetish, which I don't, so I didn't vote.

Who does it appeal to? There is no one to like in this story. The husband is a whiny little man who crawls off into the sunset. There is nothing more despicable than a boss who breaks up a marriage by sleeping with an employee's wife. The wife doesn't work. It sounds as if all she does is mooch off him and give her affections elsewhere. If there is even one person who liked this story I invite him to comment and explain it to the rest of us.

This has been done before, just not as a short, "flash" story. Probably the Nonerotic category would fit better, as there certainly was nothing in this story to turn anyone on. Some editing could have helped, as well as a bit of background re: why the wife with a weird name would stray. Guess engineers are boring or something. Two stars.

take pictures post them at her work and sue the fucking company.

they are both cheating whores.

You have too many laws.

You people are too educated.

In my country, if a woman hurts our feelings, we kill her.

kill the fucking whores....

the americans are so stupid... in my country until the fucking democracy if

you found your wife with other you can kill her and nobody cares.

Spain (Europe).

thats the problem in the 1º world too much education and too much laws

for me there are lots of dead not only the fisical dead....

you can kill somebody only with words.... and the fucking laws dont care.

but if you kill somebody .... you're a muderer.... nonsense.

sometimes its better kill someone than stay alive and suffering.

He leaves the house he is paying for to a cheating whore that has no job. His slut boss still has her job and he's worried about people laughing but if they think he's a wimp, that's so much better.

So perfect in its excess of sentiment & dearth of testosterone. Don't ever change. Some one must suffer & it might as well be youuuuuu. I don't blame the wife, as the dyke boss had more balls then hubby.

5 STARS BECAUSE SOMEONE OUT THERE IS WRITING IT LIKE IT IS. I LIKE REVENGE STORIES BUT THE AVERAGE GUY JUST WANT OR CAN'T DO THAT. AS HE SAID THERE IS NO WAY HE COULD WIN

Ok if you like wimp stories. He should have owned his employers company and the wife should have been out on her ass.

Thanks for the laughs. What a great tale of a total loser and those that screw him over. It's becoming a standard within Brit Stories that the British men have no balls and are dyed in the Wool WACCs. Keep them cumming Matt you write them we will read them. Thanks PS the wife says hahaha too

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. It's an interesting tale and I look forward to reading your next one.

... for its sad but truthfull ring.

Panther Fan.

And there was no background and no way to tell what kind of people your story tried and failed to present.

screw how others would see you. sue the bitches. you can move. they destroyed you. story leaves bad taste in my mouth. too bad no part 2 where he comes to his senses, and destroys them just like they did him