All Comments on 'It Wasn't Supposed to Happen Pt. 01'

Let the next chapter have Tom walking in on them and as he is smiling he puts a bullet in both of them.

The black is poor, on scholarship, etc. ? Mighty white of you.

Yep, my panties are so wet!

This was a really hot story. Very well written. Perhaps it hits home and colides a little to much with some of my desires. Are you probing my thoughts? ; ) Damn! Well done.

This was great, can wait to read more of you.

Josie : )

OMG...super hot. I had the same desire for one of my son's friends, but never acted on the urge. Emily is sexually liberated because she has a loving husband who has cultivated her sexuality. Bet Tom would love to hear the juicy details at some time. This story made me wet and hot...I needed to use two toys to pleasure myself. Can't wait for the next chapter. A 10 but I can only give 5 Stars.

Very hot! Kisses..Britt

You're a poor creature. A coward and a asinine simpleton. You continually post your rancid remarks while hiding behind the anon label.

Very hot story BBC due turn older white women on its more commen than people think

Strong evocative descriptions... well done!

Cowardice. That's what you wiggers are. You read patently phony stories and beat your meat. You want a traitor nigger yourself. As far as being anonymous, its only smart to remain that way. Most white people hate niggers. But niggers fight in gangs. I know because I have fought them. Literotica encourages nigger propaganda. A white guy who says what he thinks and gives his name become a single victim,A ganged upon person who hates that situation because he wants so much to strike back. And we do. You wigger nigger bastards! bUT WE ADMIT NOTHING TO YOU SCUM. wHEN THE TIME COMES WE REVEAL OURSELVES IN SPADES!

The comments are so racist both towards white and black people. I think i'm done with this category. This category is even worse than LW. At least there they fight over the story. Here you guys fight among race and stupid stories.

Plz add a part 2, 3 or even 4...it was well written regardless of races involved

GOOD STORY, AND DON'T LET ANYONE TELL YOU OTHERWISE!

Emily has a fling with Jason but that doesn't mean she doesn't love her husband!

Finds out and divorces her sorry ass and she dies a long slow death from aids or who cares cancer and a slow death would be fine also and take the nigger with her

You are a great writer and please don't listen to to the negatives. Please continue the story.

Great story. The haters here seem to not like interacial sex or cheating stories. They can be brutal but that's part of the feedback too.

I look forward to part 2. If you would have spent a paragraph going into more detail how his huge cock was so big, how far she could get in her mouth, how hse needed moth hands to stroke huge huge cock, took time to go balls deep slowly getting deeper and deeper into her. How she had to work taking that long fat shaft in stretching her more and more with the pain and lust would for me have made the story even better.

I look forward to next chapter.

that there was too much conversation when the sex started.

Sounded like a guy trying to tell a woman’s story.

I’ll read further chapters though

they started talking to each other. I loved the scenario, didn't like the dialogue. And before you go look up my stories and call me a hypocrite - yes, dialogue is hard and I think I could do better in my stories, too!

Don

Great story

It was an ok story, a little rough verbally at times. It read a little like my first BBC, he was twenty years younger than me, a married white woman who gave into curiosity. All sense of right/wrong was gone when I looked down at him lining his big black cockhead in front of my wet, open pink pussy lips. He probably thought along the same lines, she wants BBC she going to get BBC, I'm gonna fuck this white woman hard and deep and show her black cock is best. In the back office on old waiting room couch, I got what I wanted, a hard BBC fucking, his reward was fucking his first white woman. Afterwards, I laid on the couch ,my legs open, cum leaking while he dressed thinking WTF I'm off the pill. He'd fuck me many more times, I enjoyed being throat fucked by him, it went on several months until he found a young white coed. Great times while it lasted.