All Comments on 'It's a Colorful World Ch. 01'

Thanks for sharing this story. I very much enjoyed how you developed the characters and how you turned reluctance on the part of the girls into desire. I think you maintained a nice balance between the details of the storyline and keeping the pace of the story moving. It would have been easy to become bogged down in details or to have skimmed over the really goods ones that you included. Inclusion of the details of recording the events was a nice touch and could help develop even more as chapter two (and more) unfold. I could imagine it going in so many directions! I'll look forward to seeing where you might take it.

Thanks again for sharing. Well done.

they should all be fired for that

really liked them, and how they took to something completely new to two of them like ducks to water!

Really looking forward to next!

Five and fave