All Comments on 'It's All Becoming So Clear Ch. 03 Pt. 01'

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AntneilAntneilabout 3 years ago

Where is the continuation?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
you djdn't tell the truth....

I've been waiting for the continuation. It still hasn't arrived. Sigh.....

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 5 years ago
not bad

And yes it was short, but still a good read

liz33ndliz33ndover 5 years ago

this is so short. exciting but short.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Add More Please

It's a great story, like one of the best. I've waited for you to finish this for so long. Please Finish it.

Leapyearbaby29Leapyearbaby29about 7 years ago
Continue!

Please continue this! Great story! Can you make longer chapters? It's been 8 years. Can you update?

gjames17gjames17about 8 years ago
This is where it ends?!

I know it's been years, but could you add another chapter or two? Please? This is a bad spot to just leave it hanging. This great story is begging for some type of resolution. Thank you for what you've shared, so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
please wright the ending

i liked the story but it just stops which is boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loving it.

Its perfect as far as I'm concerned. I love the realism of it, please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic story.

I really enjoy reading this series so far, it is terrific. I hope you will write the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story.

Keep it up. It has good flow and i cant wait to see what happens.

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