by MSTarot
This is a wonderful story. Please continue it.
Regards
Sex isn't required for romance just emotion. And this has some great emotion throughout. I loved every minute of it!
Other than minor editing, this is an excellent love story that begs for more. Good Show
The addition of a supernatural aspect makes this story even more interesting,good job!
Simply put..... Perfection in Prose. Thanks and please keep writing I will probably finish reading your library by next week. Hint hint :)
fighting yourself is ludicrous. TK U MLJ LV NV
I love the build up! Beautifully written! Please continue to write more!
I see there is a second chapter, GOOD many of your stories have NO ENDING. I hope this one does...
Your stories are always good, but not the grammar. This one has good grammar. So good story, good grammar. Wonderful!