All Comments on 'It's Complicated'

Of course we want more---plus stuff bout mrs hart

There are good moms and bad moms....

Then there is the best kind of Mom.

Fun, Sweet, Playful, Naughty, Inventive.

You know, just the kind a son should Marry....

Your story could have been longer but I liked what you wrote, so far.

you've teased us like she did him. more please!

Have sorely missed your stories. Look forward to seeing the path you take with this.

Please

Firstly welcome back.

Secondly this storyline had much potential. A lot of things could progress from here.

Here's hoping you continue.

In Chap 2, Jake will fuck Momma in her tight smelly asshole!

you are trolling the wrong category. instead of telling authors over and over again to include anal in the next chapter. go read stories about anal. please.

Well done. Skillful. Of course he is going to fuck her. They both want to. So keep going. They both sound attractive and smart. You have a good thing going. Develop it.

I concur with those who want more. The story is well told and of course the tease forces us to desire the rest of the story. Can he handle Mom and the neighbor? Only the author knows.

You've laid all the groundwork for what promises to be a very well written and horny story, you can't just stop here now. Let's hear the rest, I know it'll be as good if not better than this first piece.

give us more!

Terrific so far.

I'd like to read some more.

Talk about a tease! You definitely need to finish what you started, but she needs to be sober and in control of her actions.

Good start. Please keep going!!

This is so charming. Plz continue

Actually, it should be a mother's job, universally acknowledged and understood, to suck off her boy whenever the kid needs it. And Jake sure enjoyed unloading his balls and shooting his big dose of creamy semen down his mother's throat. But as one reader noted, that can't be the end of the story. Mom loves her baby boy's big hard cock too much for that, and both of them know an even better place for Jake to shoot his sperm. Right, you got it in one. It's up the same warm wet hairy hole he came out of. For Jake, as for plenty of sons, nothing can ever compare with sticking his cock up his own mother's cunt, pumping it in and out, fucking the living shit out of dear old mom, and giving her a huge twaful of what he's got waiting for his mother in those hot young balls of his. Everyone know the old saying, "a mother's twat is her son's playground." Please Mr. DS, coax your muse and tell us in excruciating detail how Jake keeps making great big puddles in his own personal playground.

Great story but please continue!

the ending was too abrupt. the beginning was a good tease but could end better

You sure have laid the groundwork...now some more please!

as the mother in the story.

FTDS

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Well it sure was the quickie you'd said it was. It was sexy though. Elaborate or not? Its your call.

needs fucking

It's a great start. I like the way you describe the female clothing in your stories. Btw I like my women with heels - the higher the better. It's more feminine than flats.

Just write some more teasing parts - maybe somewhere more public or semi public. But always with a happy end ;-)

One of the better stories i've read on here.

Boy, it's really nice to have a story well writen, no grammar or spelling errors, full time beleivable, erotic as advertised. More to come, hopefully.

.... set up nicely, with plenty of openings to explore. Why not??

Please continue with this story

All the makings of a series! Opportunities to impregnate both Mom and her friend and neighbour - not to mention friend's daughter!

Carry on the good work! ;-)

This has the makings of a series with so many possibilities. The mother, the mother's friend, the daughter, and any combination.

I'd give it more stars but it left me hanging!

got to the sex a little quick but overall a good storyline. on to chapter two!

Nice beginning to what could turn out to be an interesting storyline. I will hold judgement until I see that next chapter. Have to know if Mom is going to continue to just tease him without mercy or just give in and fuck him blind.

The following week I had gotten up to take a piss one night, when I heard moaning coming from my mother's bedroom. I went to her door, and as I watched her fingering herself, something inside me snapped. I dropped my boxers and jumped on top of my mother. In her euphoric state, she didn't react immediately, and I easily inserted my hard cock into her wet pussy in one hard thrust! I thought she'd try to resist somehow after a few seconds, but she didn't. She started moaning right away and giving me encouragement instead. "Oh yes, oh honey, fuck me, fuck me baby, oh god!" "Oh yes, oh god, oh harder honey!"

I liked your story just fine the way it is. It could be longer but it doesn't have to be. Personally I hate uber long stories

a chapter 2

cannot leave it there, I think she needs to tease him to the point where he "takes" her and she loves it so much they become a couple.

I liked the story; however, I like character and plot development better. I like the characters to have chemistry; emotional attachment; respect for each other; and self-awareness.