All Comments on 'It's Nice to Be Included'

Id actruly like to see more to the story maybe add the mom in there, it'd be cool maybe a different guy also something to add the a spark. All and all it was a truly a awesome story I lived it!

most stories of this type are one sibling seducing another. it is a refreshing change of pace to have 2 older siblings already involved and a younger one joining them, and the story being from the younger sibling's POV.

very hot story, a lot of care was put into character development, but not so much so that it was a dry boring read.

a VERY well deserved five stars in my book, and if i could give you more, i would!

Every time I see your name pop up in the new stories I get excited. Once again, you have painted a masterful picture, one that is both believable and exciting to read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Ma and the youngest are lonely and could be there for each other. The group thing could happen from time to time and then the two couples retreat to their own rooms to spoon.

Great story and super erotic. I hope to read your follow-up very soon! Can't wait for it.

So then what? I hope this is just Chapter 01 - it's not nice to leave us wondering where the horny sibs go from here. What I like about Xarth's stories, in general, is the atmosphere of inevitability about them, and this one has that in spades. I could easily believe it is a true sexual adventure in the kind of family attraction that actually happens more often than people realize. Often not fully consumated, but it happens pretty frequently.

That was really great. Please, don't be too long writing chapter two. I'm dying to know what happens next. Do they all get more involved together? Do they manage to keep it from mum? Does David go alll the way with his younger sister too? Does Mon go further with her? I'm dying to know.

Love it! Never stop writing please :)

You have a way with dialog, Xarth. This is the first story of yours I've read, and I'm excited to read more. My favorite aspect of this story is the way that the siblings talk with each other... their personalities really shine through, and it makes for very vivid (and sometimes comical!) scenes.

Hope you enjoy some of my other stories too.

Incredibly cool, well-written story. I have a crush on a sibling of mine (thought would never act upon it), and you nail the feelings perfectly. Will definitely check out your other stuff. =)

Please continue.....this is one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading on this site. Love your writing style and the way you develop the story line. I feel the dynamics of the three characters is enough to focus on without adding anymore to this tale of sibling love....more, more , more........

I would love to see more stories with these characters. Everything was in good order, sex, appreciation, anticipation, excellent. More please!!

Loved it!

You need to write more adventures with these three maybe even some mom action.

I have read this story over and over again and it never gets old. Oh and I've read some of your other stories, you are amazing writer. :)

I loved it I have read it ten times now. Is there going to be another chapter? I hope so I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

I'd love to see this as a he tai anime. Good work, conclusion or not.

You started out great, hope this isn't the end of the siblings' story. What else happens?

Because all of the characters have been aware of what's going on for a while, their relative comfort with it is easy to believe. It's a good read an really calls for a sequel...

I admire your sensibility, and your concentration on the feelings between the siblings, and total lack of vulgarity. Thank you for this and for many other of your stories!

Loved your story. Have been reading your great writing for a long time.You do a great job with Incest stories. Incest is not an easy subject but you are great writing it. Left it desiring for more. Keep up the good work.

This is one of those great stories that begs for a part 2.

IMHO you have talent. Someone famous once said that if it were not for Jews, homosexuals and Canadains there would be no art. Wave that Maple Leaf and PLEASE keep writing.

Just me, I would prefer new stand alone stories over sequels, (Handcuff Sister, Waiting for Paint to Dry, All we need, and this story are just absolutely perfect as they stand) but you are the artist.

The characters are so real. And you can likely guess why I can say this. In any relationship trust is central. To be naked, perhaps bound, without recourse and totally vulnerable requires the highest degree of trust. So, who do you trust?

Lisa Ann

mmmmmm

please more, much more

I for one totally want to see how things progress or don't. I loved the characters and the dynamic they develop. As a third wheel, I felt this.

Very nice story.

Very gentle.

I would love it more if there was a next chapter.

.Begs for a sequel. Good story

Really not one of your better stories. It actually was kinda disgusting. Why play with the younger sister's feelings if they already had a relationship. It was just using her for a cheap thrill, and to control her. Shitty thing for siblings to do. Definitely not sexy.

weaker than my pullout game!

A great setup, but you forgot the actual story…

sooooo.....this was chapter 1 i guess, where's rest of the story?

At the end it felt more probable that little Sis was going back to her room to cry.

"How do you tell your older brother and sister you know they're having sex?" All-time greatest sentence to open a story.